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Break You by TammyDevil666 alým 02/04/2008 04:46 pm Chapter 15 it was cute, I loved it:) fluff (as in this case) can be a very good read, thank you. Fluff can be of the good! Life is fluffless enough without our escape being that way all the time. Nice sweet story. Kathleen Yay! Happy ending! You're right, it did get fluffy, but dark to fluffy is good. fun read, thank you. think red needs to have oz around a little bit more. it has to be frustrating. Nikkole 11/05/2007 08:21 pm Chapter 13 LOL!! I really like that last part! Ann 11/05/2007 06:30 pm Chapter 13 Ooh, I knew the Initiative was going to get brought up again. Can't wait to find out just how much the'll be playing teh villain in this story. I always loved Oz, but Tara was hard competition. Without Tara, I hope we get to see a lot more of the cool werewolf, but hopefully not in an Initiative cell. Spike, Oz, Willow, Buffy as a normal girl but being way too involved with the supernatural... Oh, the possibilities! Good luck with the rest of the story! very good read, thank you. although i will miss dru. AHA she heard the important part. Well Dru's out of the way now. No more trouble for our pair on the horizen at any rate. Kathleen Great chapter. Nikkole 11/03/2007 01:57 pm Chapter 11 OOOOO.....that can't be good! dru is always entertaining, but her planning is not always up to the task. very good read, thank you. Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next. Cara 10/31/2007 05:18 am Chapter 10 I'm loving this story, you're doing a great job. sara 10/29/2007 05:40 pm Chapter 9 really great chapter! very good read. bonus points for buffy dusting angel. love spike's uncertainty at the end of the chapter. Jasbrico 10/28/2007 03:17 am Chapter 9 A very pleasurable ride with plentiful detail, a solid plot, and the characters sounded very close to canon (other than the obvious changes you made to each role). could have listened to harm annoy angel for a long time. fun while it lasted. good read, thank you. Nikkole 10/25/2007 11:02 pm Chapter 8 NICE!! I like it!! I love the ending of this one, with her claiming him back....perfect ending!! I can't wait to see more... sara 10/24/2007 04:40 am Chapter 7 really good chapter, loved it! i can't beleive she dated that guy, either. very good read, thank you. Ahh! Is Willow the Slayer, or just lucky? Loving it! sara 10/20/2007 12:10 am Chapter 6 very unexpected twist, can't wait for more! that's ok buffy, riley is very forgettable. very good read, thank you. sara 10/18/2007 02:00 am Chapter 5 loved the chapter! I'd forget about the not normal Riley too....worried with him showing up in the story. Trouble ahead from both Angelus and Riley, not a good combination. Kathleen alým 02/02/2008 09:52 pm Chapter 4 Yeah,Spike,wipe Angelus' touch away ;) love the tale, thank you. sara 10/16/2007 04:18 am Chapter 4 poor spike and evil cliffhanger, can't wait to see what happens next. i don't think angelus would be too happy. Willow's an idiot. Hard to believe she'd wait four days for Buffy to show up. Oh yeah - another dumb Spike plan - like Angel is going to kick his butt and find Buffy anyway. very good read, thank you. sara 10/14/2007 12:35 am Chapter 3 excellent chapter, glad buffy is safe for the time being. JO 10/13/2007 08:16 pm Chapter 3 Great chapter Tammy , this is really good , I just hope that gross animal does'nt hurt spike or Buffy again. Is the slayer going to turn out to be Faith? That was gruesome Tammy D - glad you didn't pull back tho. If you're going to horrible, then go all the way. angelus at his best. spike getting fed up. good read, thank you. margaret 10/11/2007 11:54 pm Chapter 2 great story, can't wait for more sara 10/11/2007 09:19 pm Chapter 2 wow, that was a little hard to read, but i think you wrote it very well. Cool story Tammy D and cool banner. where Angelus and him - should be he and Angelus. goldenusagi 10/10/2007 01:22 pm Chapter 1 Hmm, vampy Spike and human Buffy. I like. And evil Angel! Yay! sara 10/10/2007 05:42 am Chapter 1 loving this so far! Jasbrico 10/10/2007 05:06 am Chapter 1 Interesting, however somewhat familiar plot line. Has Buffy been called as the Slayer in this story? It doesn't seem like she is based on her inability to sense Spike and Angel while dancing at the Bronze... I look forward to more chapters to see where you take the plot and characters. always preferred angelus to angel. never liked either charcter, but preferred angelus. considering where this is posted should really enjoy the read. very good beginning. Izzy 10/09/2007 10:43 pm Chapter 1 Very interesting beginning! I don't usually go for Human AU stories, but the idea of vamp Spike and Buffy, more like the girl she'd be without the Slayer, sounds great. Even without the soul nonsense, Angelus' evil is going to get compared to Spike and show how unique the punk vampire is. I'm really looking forward to reading how this Buffy fights back or defies Angelus, and how Spike's feelings for her grow. Good luck! | |||
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