this story is awesome...very complex and well done and i'm totally intrigued now, can't wait for an update, but i understand if you can't for a while... :) thanx for writing ;)

this is really good. your spike/buffy interaction is spot on! Please update soon :)

I know how RL things can get in the way. Never fear your readers will still be here whenever you can get back to us. I liked this chapter. Your ideas are very original.

I enjoy reading your story and am looking forward to reading more.

Don't knock yourself - you covered a lot of exposition, and complicated doesn't hurt!

very intriguing, not confusing...liking this very much :)

Look forward to more.

so maybe the immortal's behind it all then i guess? and poor spike and buffy, keep jumping down each other's throats...when they should be....jumping down each other's throats...:P lol

poor spike, how embarrassing and awkward...but he should see that she does still want him...on to the next chapter ;)

yeah...that would be a good idea...wonder what's up with the wonky dreams....and i can feel all of their pain so well the way you write it...poor dawnie, finding out like that...and their awkwardness with each other...very well done...reading more now ;)

such typical them...really, that last question is the one that needs answering...they just can't seem to get it right :( the conversation was perfect spuffy...wonder what's up with her dream? reading more now ;)

perfect buffy reaction!! :) loved it :) and you write andrew very well...he was annoying but i always loved him...can't wait to read more :)

very awesome start...i'm intrigued to see how buffy will react to finding out he's alive...and i like that you gave angel a hero's death while neatly getting him out of the way :) lol

Just thought you might want to know, on Chapters 1-5, there is only this... No other text there at all.