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Consumed by benslilbug Thanks 04/29/2010 07:05 pm Reasoning im so adding this to my favorites!! i was amaizing beslilbug. Oh, I usally hate the fics where Buffy and Spike have kids. But this one was great. Amazing story! I'm a teary, gosh, thanks a lot! jk. =] that was a fun read, thank you. Great story. Gotta love a happy ending. Buffy Convert 07/11/2009 02:39 pm The King of Cups' Picnic Think Chloe is so sweet. I'll bet she brought everyone intothe kitchen because shewanted chocolate milk chloe, another scene stealer. very good chapter, thank you. OMG. Chloe is so fricken' cute. Love the update, keep it up! she went home. very good read, thank you. Cate 09/06/2008 02:31 pm Munchies I really loved this chapter. Your names for the kids were so original compared to the normal "Anne's" and "Joyce's" and "William's", which just proves your creative spark. I'm thoroughly enjoying this story. Gonna update anytime soon?? Please?? enjoying the way you are telling this tale. very good chapter, thank you. Poor Buffy, her baby boys taken from her. And Natalia, a venagence demon? Keep up the great writing, Can't wait for the next chapter. Wow what a chapter. Loved it. A nice bit of family history. :-) 04/29/2010 04:15 pm Parting Whew - did Spike and Buffy have a herd? Nice story, B lmao, angel got to be human. well done! I like the happy family. Buffy Convert 07/11/2009 11:24 am Midnight Snack Buffy was indignant that Dawn might be driving a car, but had nothing to complain about if she was only dimension-shifting! You do Angelus very well, also. was 18 and I didn’t know - did 20 people already correct you? She was 17. Can Buffy go after Angelus with the turkey baster? angel really doesn't get it. very good chapter, thank you. Angelus is evil and needs to die!!!!!!! DIE!!!!!!!!!! lol, anyways, loved the dream with buffy's cute-y lil girl. great chappies. I love the friendly bickering between Spike and Xander, I really love it when they team up and have a good Angel bashing contest, and mix Willow in the bunch... Good Times for all Now I really want to know what that was about chaper 5, and I hope it was a wooden spoon she used on Angelus ;) That was fun, such a nice kitchen interlude! And could Angelus be more full of himself? Good! Let's get rid of Angelus ASAP - he's so tiring... Oooo what did she grab? A ladle, a spatula, a mug of O+ blood? I gotta know! LOL, Keep up the great writing, Jace :-) 04/29/2010 04:06 pm Greeting :-) 04/29/2010 04:06 pm Greeting Natalie is great. Love the way she got Spike in trouble and she hasn't even been born yet. natalia does sound as one would imagine buffy sounding at five. fun read, thank you. Very cute - and time for some Angel whupping. This story is so fun. I liked this chapter a lot, especially the funny future family dynamic. Here's my additional nit: "the light breeze that past through the desert" should be passed. Please keep this one coming! 07/03/2008 05:57 pm Greeting I like your fic! really like the way the story is going! I hope u update soon! and Natlia seems to be the cutest kid! Cute kid! Spirits bickering was funny. One tiny nit, though... "submit to the slumber which had alluded her for quite a while. " I think you mean eluded - as in escaping. Sorry to be a pain... *melts at the cuteness that is Natalia* That was an adorable chapter. I can't wait to read more. Jace :-) 04/29/2010 04:02 pm Dessert Buffy Convert 07/11/2009 11:05 am Dessert The Guide Book is a physics text! Great idea, that - and rather obvious now that you've pointed it out. Wot's this? Buffy doesn't know what "progeny" means? Well, I guess between dating & saving the town from monsters she really didn't have much time for reading,,, Oh oby - evil Angelus Love him knew they were having to much fun. very good read, thank you. I thought this was funny: "Why didn’t he get to be the one to be bonded forever with Buffy?" And then it got scary. Another good bit: “What does ‘progeny’ mean?” OOO I can't wait to read more! Keep up the great writing, Jace I hope Angel implodes oh, evil angel! evil angel! cool spuffy stuff. geez, does angel have to ruin evrything with his stupid jealousy? nice chappie. liked it. That's fabulous! I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great writing. I love the intro to Joyce, Tara and Anya I hope they show up more. Jace Buffy must really be in Hell, she has to crack a book and take a test :D I hope Joyce, Tara, Anya and Cordy get to come back too or the Scoobies at least get to see them. Great chapter oh! love the ending, with anya and joyce and cordy and tara watching over them. that's great. i hope we see more of them soon! nice story, btw, i like it. ~liz June 06/26/2008 05:25 pm Testing Spike and Buffy are so great together in this chapter, without being too romantic and besotted. Great update! IT 06/26/2008 05:23 pm Testing Thanks for the update! Good thinking about not telling Angel/us too much. I love the last little scene with Joyce, Anya and Tara. Way to go! 04/09/2010 03:14 pm Dinner Buffy Convert 07/11/2009 10:47 am Dinner I usually have the habit of sleeping at night. But I woke up "for a reason" and couldn't go back to sleep, thinking of Buffy & Spike in Angel's office! It's really great! Sleep is somewhat over-rated. Scooby grovelling please. lmao. fun read, thanks OMG this story is fantastic! I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great writing! Jace IT 04/25/2008 11:48 pm Dinner Their bickering is wondrfully funny! Mmmmm...Spike has to drink from Buffy - guess we can expect more great smutty Spuffy! :) :-) 04/29/2010 03:51 pm Studying They better slow down, they're going to get road rash lovely romp, thank you. Nice for Angel to get the full visuals - so well deserved! IT 04/01/2008 03:23 am Studying Well, they'll find out soon enough if they're corporeal or not. I just hope they put clothes on before they go to the door - poor Dawn!! lol Love Fred, too. Looking forward to more. Ann 04/01/2008 02:22 am Studying Wow, Dawn could hear them! I love seeing Angel moaning in this, and how totally uninhibited and unashamed Buffy is with Spike. Looking forward to seeing more Fred, too. :-) 04/29/2010 03:47 pm Lunch Buffy Convert 07/11/2009 12:21 am Lunch This just gets better & better! I love it so far. But wot was Angel saying before that make Dawny cry? Ahh! You had me in tears even in the very beginning! I could barely peel my eyes away from the story to write this review! =P But, truly, this is absolutely amazing! I have read years worth of fanfiction, and this is easily one of the best. I'll write another review when I finish. The dialouge is amazing, it is so powerful and emotional. It's simply beautiful. The purgatory thing is really...too good to be true. The "handbook" was really funny, I liked it. I don't know how I feel about the combination of this humor and the angst, but I'm warming up to it. =] Spike…later…oh…okay…not super late, ROFL Sharon 06/30/2008 08:20 pm Lunch I am loving this story, i can't wait to ready to rest! Emma 03/12/2008 05:15 pm Lunch Great chapter can't wait for the next one :) Oh what a brilliant story!! LOVE the premise. Can't wait for more. :-) 04/29/2010 03:41 pm Reading sleeptight1 01/13/2010 01:28 am Reading lol- repairmen are in either hell or on earth? we have all been scorned by them my dear! sleeptight1 01/13/2010 01:28 am Reading lol- repairmen are in either hell or on earth? we have all been scorned by them my dear! Buffy Convert 07/11/2009 12:11 am Reading Sex, sex, and more sex! easoned with humor and great dialogue! An excellent ride from my perspective. And biting! I always go for the bitey stories. : ) Wow - shagging every chapter! Can you keep it up (pun intended) Buffy Convert 07/10/2009 11:36 pm Breakfast Oh, this is too rich. All that yummy shagging, Buffy cooking something EDIBLE & now this? Wot kind of limbo allows this much fun. Man juice - LOL she always wanted a handbook. fun read, thank you. April 03/10/2008 01:07 am Breakfast A PWP of Beetlejuice?! I dunno.... Ooo...a little Beetlejuice premise. Yeah, it was on the other night and the whole "Your Guide to the Afterlife" book idea piqued my interest hehe. Beetlejuice isn't coming into the story though...he's staying safely with Tim Burton ;) Purgatory?! Can't wait for the next installment, this is going great. Katie 03/09/2008 09:32 am Breakfast Oooh this is good can't wait for next update IT 03/09/2008 06:36 am Breakfast Interesting premise. Looking forward to seeing what's in store for them. Most execellent chapter. Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Off to a fine start B with Spuffy shagging. Cate 08/09/2008 08:58 am Leaving This is such a wonderful concept! I kinda had the same one (with Buffy not letting go) but the repercussions are already much different to yours. I'm so excited to read the rest it :D:D definitely an improved ending to that scene. thanks for the read. Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! | |||
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