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Light Goes Down by auberus I just love your pre Sunnydale Vampires - all three of done with such elegance and effective character treatment - Nell 05/11/2008 06:45 am The Grey Light at Dusk Interesting to see from Darla's perspective - that doesn't happen often. Also, I've always liked Spike-with-Drusilla. The anonymous review of chapter 2 was mine, by the way; I didn't mean to be overly lurker-like by not signing it. Yolani 05/10/2008 02:25 pm The Grey Light at Dusk I am enjoying the way that you have put this story together. I like the way that you are exploring a Angel-less past at the moment, and how well you have written for all of the characters used in the story. The only criticism that I have is that I would love for the story to have longer chapters.
Thank you for such an intriguing plot and well-developed characters. I hope to read more from you soon! 05/11/2008 06:40 am Shadow Dancing This whole story is beautifully written and intriguing ... The last two lines of this chapter really "got" me. fyreburned 05/09/2008 03:52 am Shadow Dancing Really enjoyed it! I'm not usually one at all for Spru or Fanged Four, or pre-spuffy tales...but this caught my interest. Me and an author I work with were just discussing where Spike and Dru were during which decades, and in particular we were talking about their adventures together in the 1930's and pre-war Europe. Looks l like this is late enough to have brownshirts, but then again, early enough to still have them...so pre- or early war years? You seem to have captured the feel for the era well...the period music, newsreels, serials, and radio shows will set the mood every time! i think you're doing a good job so far! In the last few years i got bit by the bug to research & do WWiI historical re-enactment---and tho' for me most of that is focused a little later & with US troop focus, much reading and study crosses the cultures and countries too in the process---and your fic was just enjoyable as if i was reading a scary fiction contemporary to the time. I look forward to seeing more of this one, even tho' it's not my usual fare...btw, it's almost as if i can see Spike, Dru, Darla, etc during this time & at this place, and now you have crooning music running thru my brain & I can't get it out! LOL. Thanks again, ~~K.~~ ~~fyreburned~~ fyreburned@yahoo.com desertrose 05/08/2008 10:17 pm Shadow Dancing I really love this story. The mood, voice and characterizations are wonderful. Lovely, subtle detail in this. Excellent Story - I could really see this as a wonderful comic book or a fan fiction with accompanying images - Hope you don't mind if I try some images for it. Lily 05/07/2008 06:58 am Shadow Dancing Liking this story alot. Darla and Spike together have some great interactions and you do Drusilla's voice well. But I can't help but feel more is going on than we realize at the moment, and how it will come back later on... ;>) good work. | |||
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