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Don't Stop by NautiBitz Sara 03/31/2010 01:54 am Don't Stop: The Epilogue Hell YEAH! This was cute and dirty all at once. It's fab stuff, doll. Buffyconvert 09/16/2009 01:44 am Don't Stop: The Epilogue Aww! Loved it every inch! firedup4art 08/18/2009 05:24 pm Don't Stop: The Epilogue I love this story! But for some reason the epilogue isn't showing up anymore. Pleeease re-post it, I want to know how it ends. It's fixed now! (FYI, if something's ever not working on this site, you can always read it at my website, http://www.nautibitz.com :) firedup4art 08/18/2009 05:22 pm Don't Stop: The Epilogue I love this story! But for some reason the epilogue isn't showing up anymore. Pleeease re-post it, I want to know how it ends. Please repost the epilogue. It doesn't show up here anymore! 04/29/2009 07:14 pm Don't Stop: The Epilogue geeksgirltm 01/09/2009 03:29 pm Don't Stop: The Epilogue best fic i have ever read, period! funny in all the right places, the sex was written superbly, it was actually believable!!! now if only real sex was that hot... 12/03/2008 01:30 am Don't Stop: The Epilogue this was THE BEST spuffy fic story i have read. and i've read alot of spuffy. thankyouthankyouthankyou w 12/02/2008 09:35 am Don't Stop: The Epilogue Then what happened? "please, don't let this feeling end..." You cannot imagine how much I tried to stifle my laughter while reading this...and it only came out in weird snorty chuckles...I really shouldn't read you at work. And the choice of sarcastic jungle cat as chapter title is perfect...when I read the whole paragraph...snorty chuckle... Hardly a sentence I didn't laugh at, actually... The end is classic spuffy...tawdry, twisted, funny and sweet, all wrapped inextricably. How do you do that? You do that better than anyone else...so a plea, if you will...don't stop... ; ) jules 12/02/2008 02:30 am Don't Stop: The Epilogue Write it! Write the motel!!! P.S. You're the best. A nice ending, leaving us to spend hours daydreaming about more smut... :-) Loved it. That was hot as hell!, i have to go to Nautibitz.com now. Bye!. Bite_Me 12/01/2008 08:02 am Don't Stop: The Epilogue I loved this story! Actually I love all of your stories!!! Please write more soon! Spike leaves the best presents... Great ending! Goody - plenty of room for a sequel. Maybe blowpops come in an institutional size. Loved it - as always. ElyseNotElsie 12/01/2008 01:22 am Don't Stop: The Epilogue God, I absolutely adore everything you write! I've been a devoted reader of yours for years and I have no plans of stopping :-) And I can't believe you made Journey this hot! Don't want 'Don't Stop' to stop! Well - you know what I mean! Thanks for the great story. Your dialogue can't be beaten, and not to mention all the laugh out loud moments. Basically you leave me wanting more, more, more! ;) lilashannah 12/01/2008 12:11 am Don't Stop: The Epilogue Oh my.I laughed so hard I peed.Great story.I really wish you had written more but what you did was a blast. Buffyconvert 09/16/2009 01:28 am Hold On To The Feeling Loved your "dead zone" as a place where no live folk need apply (except as dinner)! Underpants on the rearview mirror? Eww! What if the cops pull him over and - oh, right. Sunnydale. Cops no see-um vampire. Really a shame that the gang interrupted the shenanigans and so glad that Spike didn't get dusted. Nikkole 10/30/2008 12:30 am Hold On To The Feeling OMG!! I just found this....WONDERFULL story!! I can't wait for the epilogue! Bynee 10/29/2008 05:41 am Hold On To The Feeling Awesome......... 10/28/2008 10:45 am Hold On To The Feeling There are a lot of classic lines from this chapter but my favorite... "Night night, cowgirl." He returned to his hiding spot. "We'll always have Journey." hahaha The tone reminds me of their conversation in season 7 referencing the classic Ghostbusters tag... "Who you gonna call?" Another casualty of the night, I expect. - Too funny Nautibitz as always and no way this can be the end or even the epilogue. Get cracking. 10/26/2008 10:22 pm Hold On To The Feeling Fantastic as always. Sad to see it on the way out. Can't wait to see what you come up with next! I just caught up on this again, and I loved all of it! The sex was, of course, spectacular, but I'm sure you've heard that already. :) Highlights I liked in this chapter were Spike's offer to take care of her 'friend problem,' and the line "Could have been a little awkward if they'd arrived, say, during the anal sex." And him hanging her panties on the rearview mirror was priceless! lilashannah 10/26/2008 04:26 pm Hold On To The Feeling I am so glad your writting a Epilogue..Great up date I looked everyday to see if you had posted it.I love playful Spike.As for me I would have went to the motel..lol Inwen 10/26/2008 06:26 am Hold On To The Feeling What an awesome ride (literyally!)...ghost town hijinks and kinky smut...i loved it! Aw...and there's that hint of more that makes it so much more than just laugh-out-loud funny smut. :) kim 10/26/2008 01:20 am Hold On To The Feeling Heeee, hee heee!!! Aw, man, Scoobies ruin everything! How can you hate Spike when he keeps being more adorable. :D Can't wait for the rematch. Smooth getaway for the ravished slayer. This would make a great film! Buffyconvert 09/15/2009 11:51 pm Just One More Time Comments? Comments, you say? Bloody funny & dead sexy. the dialogue is great. The sex is so in your face (and other places). And if there is no plot, I never noticed. Besides that, I think it should become a tradition to have "ghost town" scenes in Spuffy stories from now on. Canon. Right up there with pin the blame on Angel/Giles/Xander/Riley and Best Friend of the Week ("Will you choose witch number two or demon 1000?"). Who do I see about a vote? 10/16/2008 09:15 am Just One More Time This is so good I can hardly stand it!!! I'm still laughing. "Fang out and bite it." "What am I, your bloody utility knife? hoot! Apart from everything else, your Buffy/Spike dialogue is truly awesome! ;) lilashannah 10/15/2008 06:48 am Just One More Time OH MY GOD! I love it!!!! It's so Dirty and yet funny.I can't wait for more.. Yay, more hotness. And some bondage - of more than one kind :-) Great stuff! "Bloody--! Christ, you're feisty! Like a big, blonde chihuahua." Spikey and prickly and bitey and porntabulous. Y'know, burning down a bar sex should give bragging rights. Even if the rest of the story is never told, just to smile and allude to it should do the trick. 10/14/2008 10:08 am Just One More Time "That was... intense." Exactly. What a ride, whirlygig....wheeeee AMI 10/14/2008 07:16 am Just One More Time OMFG Another amazing chapter. You're like the Energizer Bunny of PrON ! Loved all of it , every single snarky word and every hot , sexy scene *drools* Can't wait for more, make them go away somewhere to continue the awesome SEX -A-THON !! KTC10 10/14/2008 06:03 am Just One More Time "She was a proud orgasm junkie, and Spike, shady schoolyard supplier, was going to help her O.D." hahahahahaha also "What am I, your bloody utility knife?" amazing as always =] kim 10/14/2008 03:58 am Just One More Time Heeeheheheheeee, they burned the house down, literally. I think it's time for Slayer and Vampire to go on vacation somewhere and avoid the world......so much more fun. ;) ROFLMAO - stopped bitching - if Buffy isn't bitching, she must be dead. "Bloody--! Christ, you're feisty! Like a big, blonde chihuahua." Too funny! These two have no off button (and aren't we glad?). Love when you update. Look forward to more FILF too...you are just addictive, hon. Kathleen pearlseed 10/13/2008 11:19 pm Just One More Time Just when you think it's safe to re-read your latest, a new chapter comes out and I hurt myself laughing my behind off, oh, yeah, while being majorly turned on (Hi I'm pearlseed and I'm a comeaholic...). I adore Spike and Buffy at their most pronounced manic rodeo exploration. Thank you so much for sharing your clever, twisty mind with us, for writing funny, bright, smart and sexy. I would love to fill this with cool compliments, I'm just nana for Nautibitz--thanks thanks thanks, ready up for the next one! Buffyconvert 09/15/2009 11:28 pm Get My Fill I want to say something profound, but my sexual & artistic fobaducaries...er, vocabularies, are too inadequate. So let me quote The One Girl In All The World and just say "Gah!" pearlseed 09/27/2008 05:20 am Get My Fill I know that it's okay to enjoy sex and to laugh and be playful, but I'm breathless as I lay here in my chair, still giggling in a nice way, hell, a totally amazed at how smunny or funnut you are--Good Gawd ya'll--you are one extremely funny summa...thanks beaucoups. Can I have a case of whatever they're drinking delivered to my house!! More please, no more writius interruptus. ya_lublyu_tebya 09/21/2008 07:42 pm Get My Fill Yum. Glad to hear it'll continue... Angie 09/21/2008 06:19 am Get My Fill You are wonderful... 09/19/2008 11:52 am Get My Fill HAHAHA...totally made my day...you are really quite...imaginative, which somehow seems like an understatement. lilashannah 09/19/2008 05:32 am Get My Fill oh my what should I say??? more Please! rizzo 09/18/2008 06:22 pm Get My Fill Oh my goodness. Awesome. Awesome. Awesome. I've been waiting for you to continue this and I really hope you get a chance to finish it soon. 09/17/2008 04:26 pm Get My Fill lord, keep it coming!! Wow! You are truly the porn master. I think Buffy and I both have discovered new kinks! AMI 09/17/2008 06:11 am Get My Fill GUH !! That was HOTTT !! Dirty ,sweaty , amazing PORN ! Great fic, Nauti *drools* Taylormaid 09/17/2008 06:00 am Get My Fill Guh! Yes, please....porn that never ends, it goes on and on and on..... This Journey song is turning out to be my favoritest song ever!!!! TwilightChild 09/17/2008 05:43 am Get My Fill I LOVE IT! LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! I think this is officially my favorite fic ever. The porn! The rough, nasty, animal, barbaric, all out porn! Plus, it's them...and boy, is it ever THEM! Wonderfully accurate characters, at least in my opinion. That was wonderfully filthy and funny. Buffy needs some Bombay Sapphire for that tonic. God that was so much fun. The acrobatics exceeded all expectations - and as for Spike's thought processes and Buffy's reactions... hilarious! What can I say, this is masterpiece theatre at its best. kim 09/16/2008 09:26 pm Get My Fill This is the porn that never ends..... :D Aiyiyiyi Buffyconvert 09/15/2009 11:09 pm Working Hard Cleaved? Where did you grow up? I didn't think anyone under the age of fifty even knew the word, much less used it*. "Tasty as a peach & as feisty as a rodeo calf". Are you trying to get me off or trying to make me fall in the floor laughing? This is great stuff! Much, much, much better than ...uh, can't 'member what I was gonna say... Like Buffy said...Gah!!! Wonderful! Dreylin 09/17/2008 08:38 am Working Hard Damn! Always the most vivid, inventive, fantastic porn scenes out of you. May you never grow tired of writing! ya_lublyu_tebya 09/10/2008 09:05 pm Working Hard Wow, that was hot. Look forward to more. CrazedHumor 09/09/2008 03:16 am Working Hard Holy crap...
HAPPY LATE BIRTHDAY!!!!
Dreylin 08/25/2008 10:26 am Working Hard You've always been one of my favorite writers, and I'm incredibly happy you're still writing. Fantastic, energetic, vibrant porn here. Thanks so much, Dreylin! I'm so glad you're enjoying it. :D 08/25/2008 03:16 am Working Hard You write the best sex and the best fighting I've ever read. Happy Birthday! Well, thank you! pearlseed 08/24/2008 05:48 am Working Hard 'This was exactly like fighting, he realized. Only it felt a whole lot better.' You write Spuffy beyond the horizon, you clever twisty writing person. The fun is there beginning to end, just what one would expect and you have that great funny bone that shows up in just about every line you write. It's impossible not to love this. I've tried to be grim and super critical and it's simply not a place one can visit from you story. '"Bit snug?" He smirked at the understatement -- Slayer was tight as a virgin.' Don't know why, just loved Spike being all Alpha male and studly. How you write him is a hoot--all bad ass and funny--you do great fight scenes too!! 'Holding her still, he asked conversationally,' again, in the middle of this marathon cockstand come to Jesus, well, he conversationally asks and that's hysterical!! I have been waiting for the rest of the fantastic barroom brawl--see that in and of itself, you can put the slayer and the vampire in a cowboy setting and it's cool as nails!! Thanks for your hard work and happy belated birthday!! You flatter me so! Thanks so much, Ms. Pearl, I love your reviews, and not just because they're so darn flattering, but because you have a way with words that makes me LOL. :kiss: 08/23/2008 08:26 pm Working Hard guh. more please. MS 08/23/2008 10:48 am Working Hard You are unparalleled, dialogue always crisp, and anything you write always makes me laugh...I hope you "never stop" with the spuffy...and a belated happy birthday... Aw, thanks so much MS, I'm really glad you're enjoying it! Lizette 08/23/2008 07:29 am Working Hard ahhhhhhh....how could u stop there?!?! Your bad.....evil! I want more....please? I'll try to get it done soon! ARose 08/23/2008 07:12 am Working Hard Loved it. Twas hot. Major props. Thanks ARose! Hee! I think you've outdone yourself with this one. Birthdays must agree with you. :) Why thank you, Slayme! It must be all the spanking. ;D kathyshop 08/23/2008 03:38 am Working Hard Know I remember why I like your stories! Very hottie, hot. I especially liked "Straight-up evil with a side of fantastic orgasm." Keep it coming! Heh heh! Hehe, thanks Kathy! kim 08/23/2008 03:31 am Working Hard perfect pair of golden, baby-soft creampuffs with nipples that might as well be tattooed with the words Bite and Here - Best description of breasts ever. LOL You get so creative with these descriptions. Thank goodness this isn't the same ol' fic sex! Right funny porn, too. Can Spike come over when he's done with Buffy? Sure thing -- assuming he can still walk! I'm so happy to hear that the descriptions resonate for you. There's a thin line between being imaginative and being just plain ridiculous, and I never know when I've crossed it. Thanks for the vote of confidence, Kim. :) elysenotelsie 08/23/2008 02:57 am Working Hard I'm so glad you updated! I live for your fic- yay pr0n! Happy birthday too. Thanks elyse! :) Happy Bday Nauti - this was fabulous. Comic and humor all at once. Great! Thanks hon! Buffyconvert 09/15/2009 10:38 pm Find Emotion Yay! On with the porn! But can we call it something else? Cultural exchange, maybe? pearlseed 07/25/2008 03:58 pm Find Emotion You made me do it, I didn't wanna do or however that old song goes!!! Dadgum, you and your fab writing forced me to love this very goofy funny story about the beloveds. To which I say, okay, now that you did this nefarious thang, where's the rest of them so smooth creamy centered tuffly like chapters which will lead to delightful mental pictures I can only barely imagine? Please more soon, after your real life and helping to stop global warming etc okay, please!?! oh, really do groove on this fab feeling piece 06/27/2008 09:19 pm Find Emotion Loved it soo much!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter 06/27/2008 09:10 pm Find Emotion Loved it soo much!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter Jules 06/17/2008 07:57 pm Find Emotion WONDERFUL! KEEP WRITING! MOAR! Excellent as always, jesus christ Nauti, youve delievered for how man years now? full of mojo you are! Ciandra 06/03/2008 10:41 am Find Emotion Love this so much, Please update soon! jess2357 05/23/2008 12:22 pm Find Emotion Hmm, amazingly, this is actually kinda believable (which for non-spell induced s2 kiss is darn impressive). Alcohol, plus long fight, plus desire for revenge. All good motivation for overcoming surface disgust. Will await updates with bated breath. 05/22/2008 01:56 am Find Emotion Oh you did NOT just end it there!!! *crying hysterically* 05/21/2008 07:16 pm Find Emotion "Slayer!" Shocked and impressed, Spike shoulder-nudged her. "You're evil!" I love it! And they're recovering from their wounds...and the kissing...mmmm.... Keep it coming. Of course, awesome as usual. And very prompt! :) More LOL!! Better than Cary Grant at his quippiest. The last few exchanges are priceless. Kudos! timeofchange 05/20/2008 12:25 pm Find Emotion I study your dialog like a lesson. ya_lublyu_tebya 05/20/2008 12:13 pm Find Emotion Look forward to the porn! :-) Hot chapter. Ivy 05/20/2008 11:14 am Find Emotion Yay they kiss at last!! lol next up porn very blunt. :) Can't wait for the next chapter!! how exactly did he expect to scare Willow with fish? anyways can't wait for more! IT 05/20/2008 06:21 am Find Emotion That was totally HOT!! You rule! Great chapter. Really looking forward to what's coming up next. Favourite line: "You're a slayer. I've never seen one naked." lol :) Very funny Bitz - it's creepy how much Sara looks like Clara. (con't from LJ) and yes, the resemblance is uncanny, especially the eyes. It's a good thing they healed in time for chapter 5! You write the best Spuffy trading insults ever! pearlseed 05/20/2008 03:10 pm Share The Night Humorous One, it is deliciously hard to review and laugh my behind off!~and if you throw in Zappa(critter) on the keyboard, well...You write the bestest dialouge, so quick and so channeling the Buffster and Spike (He of devastating ABs). "Made you look."--good golly, Spike is so little brother annoying sometimes...this scene is purrfect!! I'll wash dishes if you'll keep writing!! The laughs are fine!! timeofchange 05/20/2008 12:17 pm Share The Night "Because he's a gigantic tool," he answered plainly. She sat down again. "Amen to that." Hahahaha! I love that. The snark in this story is a delight! LMAO - you're the bestest Nauti. More snark more snark. "To your imminent death." :lol: couldn't-possibly-be-weirdersphere :lol: "Blast that wrong turn at Albuquerque." :lol: "It's a very long story, okay?" "Lucky for you," he refilled her glass, "I'm immortal." :lol: Tall dark and cumbersome :lol: "Why does he want you to suffer?" "Because he's a gigantic tool," he answered plainly. She sat down again. "Amen to that." :lol: No one make me laugh quite like Nauti. Another great chapter. I'm thinking this truce may last a while yet... Looking forward to the next update. Spike's description of Angel or Angelus is pretty much perfect. Me? I'd slay the damned jukebox. Ivy 05/18/2008 06:27 am Share The Night yay to Angel(us) bashing, hope there's more of that! I cant wait for another update, really wanna see how this goes. Fish? Huh? Colour me intrigued. Me saying this is becoming redundant: awesome banter! Really, you are the reigning Spuffy banter Queen. IT 05/17/2008 09:06 am Share The Night Another great chapter! Love the bantering and the UST. They are hilarious! Great work, thanks! Yay! Great update! Tamara 05/17/2008 12:35 am Share The Night First rate snark! Ya gotta love it, Mark Evans 05/17/2008 12:12 am Share The Night Thank you so much for the update :) . I'm so enjoying this story, and I can't wait for the next chapter. "Why does he want you to suffer?" "Because he's a gigantic tool," he answered plainly. Perfect! They make a great screwball comedy team. Ninargh 10/30/2011 12:06 am Everybody Wants A Thrill 'Into her vagina'! HAHAHAHAHA! *cackles madly* Ahem. Well played Buffyconvert 09/15/2009 10:14 pm Everybody Wants A Thrill Latex?! That's so eww! Except for that, I am enjoying their fight very much! very good read, thank you. Great writing - I can really see the action. Can't wait for more. Ivy 05/13/2008 03:11 pm Everybody Wants A Thrill ROFL. I loved the way they taunted each other with Angel and Drusilla's name. That Journey song has got to be getting annoying by now! can't wait for more!! LMAO Nauti especially at Buffy finding a new way to break Spike's nose. HEh heh kathyshop 05/13/2008 02:17 am Everybody Wants A Thrill Love your work and am enjoying the UST build-up with our dynamic duo. Love the banter with them. Looking forward to more! Nice work, love," he said. Into her vagina. I know everyone else is probably going crazy wondering when the sex will get here, but I have to say this lead up is fun! That part above was hilarious, but then I got to where they were taunting each other with Drusilla and Angel, and I think I may have cackled. Looking forward to the next chapter! IT 05/13/2008 12:42 am Everybody Wants A Thrill LOL!!! This is awesome! Can't wait for more. :) Twilightchild 05/12/2008 11:15 pm Everybody Wants A Thrill And again, I nearly wet myself reading. This story is becoming very dangerous to my office chair. I especially loved the 'I see france!' and Spike speaking into her vagina. That mental image kept my head on the desk. I couldn't stop laughing long enough to lift my head to look at the screen for two minutes. Love this story. Love it love it love it. Please do continue. Hehe. Nice. So much UST going on... Buffyconvert 09/15/2009 09:59 pm On and On "I couldn't have nightmared a suckier way to go." This is my first time hearing 'nightmare' as a verb. I like it. 11/05/2008 08:45 am On and On OMG..."It's the great space coaster, get on board, on the great space coaster...we'll explore!" I didn't realize anybody else remembered The Great Space Coaster. And this is so action packed...wonderful as always This is hilarious! Love the Robert Smith reference. Oh, God, this is freaking hilarious. I loved every minute of this first chapter. Thank you for a highly entertaining read. fine start. thanks for the fun read. Fantastic fight and whiplash repartee. I love it. ivy 05/12/2008 01:04 pm On and On I already love it. I was laughing like crazy when Buffy was on the Bull. Can't wait for an update! i wanna see how the fight ends! TwilightChild 05/12/2008 05:13 am On and On Ohhhh, NICE start. I laughed my ass off. I especially loved how childish they were, with the 'made you look!" Though Spike's was better. Love the 'shut up, Spike' while riding the bull. The two of them had so much chemistry, even in season 2. You're really making this fun, and I can't wait to see more. woo hoo Nauti - great fight scene. Damn it! Suck us in and get us all suspensey, then leave us hanging. Ahhhh! You always grab us right from the beginning :-) ya_lublyu_tebya 05/11/2008 08:40 pm On and On Snark... fighting... Spike... What more do you need? Well, an update would be good :-) More please! Glad you're back! Can't wait for more! Cas/Anaunthe 05/11/2008 06:08 pm On and On Hey Nauti - thanks for coming to the party, and bringing us a Gift! Not what I would have expected, but that's half the fun isn't it? Mitashade 05/11/2008 04:01 pm On and On Awesome as always. I can't remember the last time I bothered to start reading an uncompleted work, cause it drives me nuts! Keep it coming! I'm a sucker for a good season 2 fic - and this is sooo good! Love the banter, the oh-so-creative fighting, and am, as usual (!), looking forward to the sex! anonymous fan 05/11/2008 01:54 pm On and On Good good good. Glad to see you're still writing...I'm not going to lie, I'm kind of secretly waiting for the sequel to "Crash and Burn." Love your stuff, thank you! Tamara 05/11/2008 10:10 am On and On Excellent start. I can only wonder what Buffy and Spike can get up to with an empty bar, a lot of booze, rope and a mechanical bull. That was a litte slice of heaven! Gotta say, Spike with a lasso is just plain hot! Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for writing! | |||
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