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Stage Fright by angelic_amy Thanks. :-) 04/24/2010 09:21 pm Chapter 4 Loved this. From the very beginning your dialouge and storyline sucked me in. I wanted to keep reading up to the very end. Great piece. Yay, happy ending! Olga Malyavskaya 07/14/2008 08:31 pm Chapter 4 Thanks for the story. It was really heart warming :) Though I didn't get a part about Spike's chip. Both Buffy and Spike knew it wasn't working with her, so why were they discussing his chip again? Cate 06/30/2008 12:02 pm Chapter 4 Very cute and romantic! However Spike's chip doesn't work on Buffy in Season 6... but I'll give you artistic freedom just 'cause it was so beautiful :) All4Spike 06/14/2008 12:38 am Chapter 4 I loved it! Good for Tara to get Buffy thinking clearly. I'm just a bit puzzled by the reference to the chip not firing if there was no intent to hurt, when they started sparring. If we're in season 6 (which from the context we must be) the chip doesn't work on Buffy anyway... Kryssie 06/10/2008 03:16 pm Chapter 4 OH MY GOD.... I LOVED IT, LOVED IT!!!!!!!!! I think my favorite part was that you had them fight in the middle... It was boss... This is one of the best fics i have ever read and i have read thousands... Make more like these and u will be easily be my favourite fic writer. delightful read, thank you. astrodex 06/09/2008 07:06 pm Chapter 4 It was a good story but I had one problem. Spike's chip did not work on Buffy by the time they began their relationship. I think it would have had just as much, if not more impact, if she was able to trust him not to hurt her even without the chip. lachica 06/08/2008 07:08 am Chapter 4 awwwe. that was so sweet! lachica 06/08/2008 07:06 am Chapter 4 awwwe. that was so sweet! spuffy 06/07/2008 09:49 pm Chapter 4 wow! i really really love it!! great ending! and the way she told him she was his... well it was diffrent and so sweet ... i love it and hope you will write more stories! Loved the deep self analysis by Buffy helped along by Tara to get to this great Spuffy ending. Blackoberst 06/07/2008 11:53 am Chapter 4 Very nice story indeed! The sparring was excellent! The ending, funny and sweet. Thanks for sharing a lovely little story. Hope you'll have something new again soon! Lovely! So typical of Buffy to think the words but not vocalize then finally let her fists speak for her...sigh...good think Spike eventually reads her right LOL. Come to think of it my husband has a habit of thinking and not verbalizing too....I need to learn Spike's trick *G*. Very much in character here had she decided to listen to her own heart for a change. Always glad to see new work from you! You don't disappoint. Kathleen Phew - Buffy nearly chickened out on the apology... I don't think she'll be regreting doing it! Lovely ending. lachica 06/08/2008 07:08 am Chapter 3 awwe. poor Buffy. I'm very much enjoying this! lachica 06/08/2008 06:54 am Chapter 3 awwe. poor Buffy. I'm very much enjoying this! Deb 06/06/2008 11:14 am Chapter 3 Insightful chapter. Love the snappy dialogue that you have going on with Spike and Buffy. Very character driven and spot on. Looking forward to more of your story. glad tara is able to help buffy see some of the truth buffy avoids. very good read, thank you. Loved Tara here. Good advice. Spike's reaction was harsh! Not badly written, or false, just harsh! *snort* Yeah, like he'd stop wanting her! Buffy has some real issues there doesn't she? YAY Tara...I always wanted her to say straight out what she merely implied in S6 when Buffy would confide in her. Buffy can't pick up on subtle and needs to be bludgened with the truth....Tara danced around the good advice but never wacked her properly....what a shame! Glad your Tara is taking the bull by the horns here. Idiot Willow...the guy sounds just like what she would choose! A male Riley with Willow overtones....yeeech! I remember that SHE was the one to push the whole Riley disaster on Buffy to begin with...sigh! Excellent. Kathleen Yay, she's at least admitted having some feelings to Tara! Now for the hard part. Your'e telling a great story, thanks for sharing! Can't wait for more soon! Buffy really needs to pay attention to Tara - unless she wants to end up with a series of Willow's choices! :-) 04/24/2010 09:08 pm Chapter 2 avreader 06/08/2008 07:08 am Chapter 2 poor confused buffy.... awe. avreader 06/08/2008 06:44 am Chapter 2 poor confused buffy.... awe. run from tara, run from spike. great choices buffy. very good read, thank you. I just feel so *sad* for both Buffy and Spike. I truly hope she'll come around sooner rather than later... and in the meantime, will Spike try to do something, anything, to win her back? I'm intrigued! ya_lublyu_tebya 06/01/2008 08:11 pm Chapter 2 Wow, she better mean back on the market with Spike. Silly girl. Wish she'd listened to Tara. Interesting start... look forward to more. Nice to see an update so soon! Sad to see same old Buffy, ever the pleaser where her so called friends are concerned. Looking forward to more soon! Listen to Tara! Gee I wish she had (in canon and here). Buffy needed real guidance to read her own heart. Glad you had Tara say what you did. Poor Spike has his heart in tatters again. Lovely update. She SHOULD cry...idiot! Kathleen Buffy can't manage to fly solo for a while? How disappointing - it'd be the best thing for her. I just hope she doesn't mess with Spike's head! *SLAP*, that was for making me cry.... It was good though:) ... avidreadera 06/08/2008 07:09 am Chapter 1 awwweee.......poor spike....this was really sweet and heart breaking avidreadera 06/08/2008 06:34 am Chapter 1 awwweee.......poor spike....this was really sweet and heart breaking very good beginning. very sad beginning. if this was a different site, she deserves to have spike move on to someone who could give him what he deserves. (that is too long of a sentence.) good read, thank you. Trench 06/01/2008 02:28 am Chapter 1 This, by far, is the most well-written Spuffy break-up I have read in a long time. Can't wait to read more! emma 06/01/2008 01:43 am Chapter 1 Oh, you almost had me in tears. Please update soon. Oh, so sad! *sniff* spuffy 05/31/2008 10:44 pm Chapter 1 that was sad! i was sure that when you wrote that she will make a change you meant that for the better not end it! well i know its not the end of the story (it better not be :) ) so cant wait for more please update soon ! OH the girl is such an idiot. Love this opener...you've echoed the way she ended it on the show nicely and captured the emotions quite well. It would serve her right for Spike to "move on"! (okay...appear to do so since we all know he wouldn't). How quickly she's forgotten leaving him a bloody mess in that alley...still no apology for that from her either. It's all about her and what's "good" for her! Poor Spike! Wonderful to see your muse back and in fine form too. Kathleen Excellent - looking forward to reading more. Rapsody 05/31/2008 04:00 pm Chapter 1 Waiting for more, this has possibilities. Just as painful this time round - at least Buffy was considerate. | |||
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