Business as usual by Lilachigh
Chapter: Chp 29 Business Women United

01/25/2013 08:27 am
  "Free, without charge". You so want her to do the magnanimous thing, but it's Anya, she's just not built that way.  Excellent chapter here.

ca
11/07/2008 06:34 pm
My first reaction-not very well done of Anya, but then I've been reading a ton of fic with happily ever after Anya/Giles or Anya/Zander.  When I consider the show, she really wasn't very nice to Spike.  For being an ex-demon on the periphery of the scooby group, she was not empathetic, and so extorting her fellow (formerly) demons fits as well.  You are just busting up my illusions!  (but in a healthy, humorous way)

09/30/2008 06:53 pm
always thought anya's priorities were way better than the rest of the scoobies'. very good read, thank you.
 Thank you! Hoping to update very soon. Like tonight if i am  lucky!

sirc
09/25/2008 06:52 pm
Well done
 Thank you.

09/25/2008 03:21 am
Heh heh - Anya bribed with a basket of muffins and did that cake Xander was eating have any little drops of blood in it by chance?
 Well spotted!  The tarts were made for the demons the night before, so....... Oh, I wish he knew what he'd just eaten.

All4Spike
09/23/2008 06:06 pm
Love Anya's pragmatic attitude. But then I always did. You've captured exactly right the way they always ignored Anya's contributions and shut her down without the slightest consideration that anything she might have to say might be relevant. Rather as they did with Spike.
 Thank you!   I love Anya and was always so annoyed by the way they ignored everything she said - especially during the Glory section of the story.  Such a waste of a wonderful character.  I keep marrying her off to different people in my stories!

09/23/2008 12:56 pm
I liked how Aggie stood back and observed the Scoobies, her takes on Willow and Anya were dead-on. I especially enjoyed her interaction with Anya at the end of the chapter.  And again the glimpse into Aggie's head was wonderful, I like that she decided to make Dawn and Spike her personal mission in life. :) Fantastic update!
 Glad you enjoyed the chapter.  I was worried about writing Willow in this between Seasons stage of her life. All that power just about to grow and change. Getting the emphasis right is difficult.  But my Agnes will do her best for the ones she loves.  And hopefully what is good for them, not just for her.  Or does that make her a big of a prig?

09/23/2008 11:48 am
Anya is being very fairminded, I don't think Agnes' vamp status would have gone down well with Xander or Willow (already powertripping!)  Smashing chapter.
 Pleased you enjoyed the chapter.  Yes, Willow is already beginning to change.  What's the old saying? Power corrupts and complete power corrupts completely.

IT
09/23/2008 07:12 am
So, in case you haven't got the reviews I've just left for the past four or five chapters, I just want you to know that I'm back to reading Agnes!  Sorry about going AWOL.  I was following too many WIPs and trying to spend quality time with the kids over the summer, so I had to cut back on the Spuffy for a while. :(  

This chapter has some great character interactions.  I can see Agnes and Anya being great allies.  Of course Xander can't see past the end of his nose, or pastry depending on what he's doing.  Willow is too self-centred.  I bet Tara would have a sense of who/what Agnes is and could be another ally.  

Thanks for the update and I look forward to more! 
 You know, I really appreciate you taking all that time and trouble to make individual comments about each chapter.  It makes all the effort seem worthwhile.  Yes, Tara would, I feel, have had a good idea about Agnes and so far I am not quite certain whether Giles knows or not.  The Dawn factor is so very important to everyone at the moment.

I'll certainly try and update again soon but must get in a chapter of We Will Remember Them....before end of week.

09/23/2008 03:41 am
So glad Anya didn't let the cat out of the bag.
I do love Agnes.  However, I'm glad she isn't in MY town - I'd gain 50 pounds.
Your Willow sounded kind of weird in this chapter.  Maybe a little "british-ish"?  Particularly “Yes, Anya, you must be careful. You can’t go round upsetting people all the time. Think before you speak,” Willow said. “We’ve got such a lot to do and it will be useful having Dawn out of the way. I don’t want her to guess about – well, you know! So just watch what you say.”
Can't wait till the next installment!
 Thank you so much for the review and for pointing out the slight problem with Willow's dialogue. i have gone in and edited it slightly. Hope it reads better than before.  I find her 'voice' difficult to get right in this mid season section.  So much is developing in her mind and it must alter her speech patterns a little.

09/23/2008 02:25 am
Our Agnes is a sly one! She has Anya down cold, and they just met. I love that Dawn is unintentionally spilling things and breaking crockery. Nice detail that calls up Miss Kitty Fantastico.

I also wonder if The Willow Tree will be part of what feeds Giles' homesickness over the summer-of-no-Buffy?
 Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Much appreciated.  Yes, I feel Giles might well be a regular visitor for a few weeks!