The Bloodshedverse | Spuffy with Bite

01/26/2014 12:15 am

Very good story, I really enjoyed it. I really liked the fact that you had a still-unsouled Spike as the hero, and actually had Buffy admit to her feelings for him. Bringing Willow and Xander (almost) completely around to Buffy's side was also a good move. Giles was problematic for me. Although I liked him in the earlier seasons of the show (when Spike was first chipped), and Giles seemed to accept the fact that the chip happened for a reason, by the end of the show, I couldn't stand him. He was the same here: at first understanding and almost supportive, then distrustful and cruel--and that was when he wasn't being influenced by Dr. Walsh!

Overall, great story! I would definitely like to read more. Thank you for sharing your talent with the rest of us

Thank you for reading and taking the time to let me know you enjoyed the story. I think this was only my third or fourth story. I have more on my livejournal account mabel_marsters, and also on Elysian Fields and the Spuffy Realm.

It's great when a story posted so long ago gets a review.

I agree with you regarding Giles. They did change his character completely towards the end of the show. I enjoyed writing him as the bad guy! LOL!

Deb

07/29/2010 05:14 am

Great adventure fic. Thanks for taking us on a trip through the initiative.

Thank you so much for reading. Delighted you enjoyed the ride. Check out other archives for other stories that I haven't got around to posting here. :D

Fab read. Thanks. :-)

05/04/2010 07:19 am

Thank you very much for reading and letting me know you enjoyed it :-)

marstersrules

02/06/2010 09:05 pm

i love it i love it i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!in deed the most interesting initiative story i read!!!!!!!!!!!dont stop writing!!!!!!!

Your comment has just made me grin like an idiot! Thank you so much. It is very much appreciated.

Schantelle

01/27/2009 04:17 am

This fic was brilliant! I read it in two days, just couldn't stop. Well done!

Thank you so much for letting me know that you loved the story :)

Really appreciate it.

Check out my lj under Mabel_marsters for my other fics - got some post shanshu Spike that I can't post here :)

Mabel Marsters :)

10/11/2008 09:09 pm

Great work, filling in lots of possible futures in this tangled web of a plot! Horrid, frightening parts, very sad and tear-making places but a fab ending. Matt's a good original character, too, with lots of room to grow. Even Xander mananged to meet a new girl.

Thank you so much for letting me know that you enjoyed the story. I had a great time writing it :)

I appreciate you saying that you liked Matt too, as I include an OC in my fics whenever I can. I enjoy creating them and two have won me awards - not Matt though as he's not in it for long enough to get a nomination I think! LOL!

Please check out my other fics on my lj http://mabel-marsters@livejournal.com some can't be posted here as feature post Shanshu Spike or AH/AU's.

Thanks again for reading and for commenting.

KTC10

10/06/2008 03:09 am

I love Spike's "what are your intentions" talk with Matt. Especially “Don’t worry mate, you’re family now. I hardly ever eat family.” =]

Does poor Matt know what he's letting himself in for...? LOL!

Thanks for all of your comments along the way and I hope you'll give some of my other fics a try :)