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Fate by moluvsnumber17 07/20/2011 10:25 pm That took long enough! Sweet. :-) 06/05/2010 05:07 pm 10/17/2008 08:28 pm very good read, thank you. 10/16/2008 02:50 pm I'm really happy about the update. I like how you treat the characters as if they actually were grown-ups. *gasp* I'll be interested to find out how you will handle Buffy and the fact that she gives everyone else's opinion more weight than her own concerning Spike. I've never really understood that. I mean, arguably, she's spent way more time with him than anyone else under a huge variety of circumstances. They don't seem to be in possession of the facts to truly back up their opinion. I assume it's a low self-esteem issue on her part. (Sorry, my musings.) Given the structure of your story and how Buffy is haunted by Martin, I assume he will be making an in person appearance at some point. I look forward to that. Although...I am wondering, since so far he has been portrayed solely as an insensitive, heavy-handed jerk and not as well-rounded and well, as real as the other characters, what did Buffy ever see in him? There must have been something. Hope to find out - maybe in a flashback? I think that balance needs to be there given your story. I don't think he can just have been evil in sheep's clothing. A nice, sensitive portayal of adults with complicated lives and feelings. Refreshingly different. I'm looking forward to more. | |||
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