07/11/2009 02:49 am
so, she works at nite, in a theatre, interesting :) am hooked.. off to the next
Ooo hooked - I like that!
12/30/2008 05:56 pm
Let Me Call You Sweetheart is a wonderful song/melody and one of my faves! Strange that I know both of the songs or maybe it's just age since songs were around a lot longer in the past than they are now. And I am anxiously awaiting to see what the trio is up to. And just how Miss Harlan figures into the equation?
Heh heh - Let me call you Sweetheart is REALLY old. All will be revealed after a couple of cliffhangers. Thanks for reviewing.
12/30/2008 12:22 am
Miss Harlan is a bit weird. Definitely strange with her stealing and her openness.
She's everything that Cecily isn't. Thanks for reviewing.
12/29/2008 01:17 am
The story is coming out so well that I would not hurry to finish it - better to continue on the very nice road you are on and make this the best William - maybe even Spike - that you can create.
It really is coming out well -
It really is coming out well -
Thanks so much. I'm working on something else, but maybe I can think about a sequel.
12/29/2008 01:16 am
WOW the song choice!!!! My father used to sing the first one to my mother and I can hear him as I read the words. The second was the one he sang to me ( I was his Kathleen Mo mhuirnín!). You've made me cry but in a nice way for the lovely memories. My father has been gone since 1982 and I miss him very much.
Love this story. Your slang is a delight and I am quite interested in how this plays out. Nice authentic feel to the original characters.
Kathleen
Love this story. Your slang is a delight and I am quite interested in how this plays out. Nice authentic feel to the original characters.
Kathleen
We had a player piano when I was a kid and my dad used to sing a lot of those old songs too, and sadly, he's gone too. He used to pretend that he was playing the piano and my brother and I were so stupid that we believed him. I'm so glad that you have that nice association. Thanks so much for the note.
All4Spike
12/28/2008 09:36 pm
Curiouser and curiouser.
William has jumped down the rabbit hole now. Thanks for reviewing.
12/28/2008 02:28 am
Great Update - your story keeps getting more and more entertaining - Love how you are bringing in all the period slang and your references to those three diabolical characters. the "I'm your huckleberry" reminds me of one of my fav film - plus another nice touch with Cagey Leander.
Altogether a lively and lovely William Pratt story.
Thanks as always - I'm almost regretting that I didn't work it up to a 75K extravaganza, but I wanted to focus on another piece.