01/16/2012 02:51 pm
Just like Buffy to realize what she had and what she wanted a little to late.
01/16/2009 01:33 pm
Very nice sequeway between the two events. It's always good to read about Buffy just letting it loose.
01/13/2009 10:51 am
I lurk, and rarely if ever leave reviews, but this demands that I do so. I found when I reached the end, that I had tears rolling down my face. Very heartbreaking, and very touching. Excellent job.
Yay for me! :-) I'm glad I could compel to you tears and to leave a review!
01/13/2009 06:03 am
I really love to think that she did mourn, did hope. They never made it seem so in the Angel episodes or the comics but I know the Buffy I saw in S7 would have...this is her. Nice one shot (even if it would beg for a reunion sequel LOL).
Kathleen
Kathleen
S7 Buffy definitely would have missed him and mourned for him- they were so close at the end. Silly writers. Glad you liked.
01/13/2009 03:27 am
Aw, Buffy. No tears for 148 days? He shed a few. Much healthier.
This is so sad, and then just frustrating, since you know she'll be suffering for much, much longer than necessary.
Very well done. I especially liked this passage:
“He counted,” she whispered, squeezing her eyes shut tightly to stop the tears that threatened to break free at the mere thought of Spike. She took a deep breath and focused her gaze on a nearby bush, struggling to keep her voice even.
This is so sad, and then just frustrating, since you know she'll be suffering for much, much longer than necessary.
Very well done. I especially liked this passage:
“He counted,” she whispered, squeezing her eyes shut tightly to stop the tears that threatened to break free at the mere thought of Spike. She took a deep breath and focused her gaze on a nearby bush, struggling to keep her voice even.
Glad you liked. Thanks for reading!
Keddy
01/13/2009 01:32 am
“He counted,” ...“So I counted too. One hundred forty-eight days.” Wow! Great line, so short, so perfect. I love this. I want more but I don't at the same time because it is really a beautiful moment. WOW!
Aww, I'm glad to hear! Especially glad to hear you don't want more :-p Just a short burst of inspiration :-) Thanks for reading!
01/13/2009 12:19 am
good, except it was only 19 days, unless you just wanted to change that. there should be a continuation showing their reunion or something.
01/13/2009 12:14 am
good, except it was only 19 days, unless you just wanted to change that. there should be a continuation showing their reunion or something.
Was 19 days canon? Oops. Oh well, I changed it :-)