Anticipation by 2writers4spike
Chapter: Chapter Twenty

jane
08/20/2009 09:21 pm
Finally, now hopefully Spike can relax and enjoy his relationship.
Good update
We made you wait for a long time, didn't we?  LOL!  Both Mabel and I are not smut writers and we only put it in where we think it really fits.  I hope the end result was satisfying enough?  :)  Thanks so much for reading.

~ Dawn

Kate
08/18/2009 03:16 pm
Great chapter!  I love how Spike took care of Kathy! lo  And what a sweet scene of Buffy and Spike being together for the first time.  You've done a great job of balancing Spike using his knowledge to make things better, but also having thing still go wrong because life is never perfect (i.e. Giles not believing Spike)
Thank you, Kate.  We're thrilled that you like what we've done with the story.

~ Dawn

08/18/2009 07:08 am

Really like how you handled the sex in this chapter - just enough to let the readers know that it was a wonderful experience for them without all the "over the board" fantastical sex descriptions that are so often part of the Spuffy fan fiction.  Often writers seem to get carried away with the sex between these two that it feels more like parody instead of a realistic sexual experience.

So far Spike has been able to clear away a lot of the dreadful things that happened to her - looking forward to see how you treat The Initiative arc and the Giles-Soike relationship.  I was always hoping that Spike and Giles would become, if not friends, at least develop a better relationship, find some way to respect each other instead of always having Giles show him so much disdain.

Thank you very much for such lovely comments.  I totally agree with regarding hoe sex scenes are often portrayed in the fandom.
Mabel

08/18/2009 05:50 am
 Awww I love it! Their love is so new and cute and well just perfect! 
Thank you.  It is nice for Spike to have a Buffy that is open for his love.
Mabel