I've already told you how I love your writing--the way you write the characters, your clever plot, etc. but I'll tell you again! :-) Who was really more evil--Spike or Willow and Xander for their plot to destroy him? What a unique idea to have Willow remove his chip! It backfired, of course, but it gave Spike a chance to show he has really changed...although I'm glad Spike got to punch Xander a couple of times before he was pulled off. ha! And I'm glad that in your version Willow realized she had gone overboard with her magic.
Adia was fascinating. I hope you write a follow up story about her as she learns things aren't just black and white, but they can also be gray.
And I love the idea of them coming on vacation to Florida. Hey, Spike, you can stay at my house (and maybe I'll even let Buffy stay, too!)
I always do like it when Willow owns up to what an idoit she's been. I swear, that girl isn't addicted to magic, but the power to control other people.
Good, Adia's gone. I liked her at first too, but the minute you go after Spike, I have a hate on for them. lol
