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We Will Remember Them by Lilachigh
Chapter: Chp 29 Advanced Ideas
11/28/2009 06:37 pm
Chilling! Reminds me of Raiders of the Lost Ark in a way. Looking forward to seeing how Buffy will get them out of this sticky wicket and regain Spike's trust.
11/28/2009 12:39 am
You really did a great job of giving this chapter a scary vibe, Buffy's interaction with Dr. Walsh and his wife was totally creepy. I can't wait to find out what Buffy does about Spike's problem. Great update!
hochexplosiv
11/26/2009 07:04 pm
Actually, german television translated "The Slayer" as "Die Jägerin" (The Hunter). It's not quite the same meaning as in englisch, but it suits the Slayers job description. If you need help with the translation for the lines of the german characters at some point of your story feel free to ask me.
Thank you so much for your comments. I must admit I just translated Slayer literally. Quite like Toterine - sorry my machine won't do umlauts! Die Jagerin is good too, though.
11/26/2009 05:14 pm
Spike certainly has bad luck with those initiative types...I'm beginning to wonder how he survived so long when he gets caught by everything.
That's a nasty place you cooked up, probably even more horrifying than the initiative itself, since it's in its baby-steps. I look forward to seeing how Buffy is going to take the place down.
That's a nasty place you cooked up, probably even more horrifying than the initiative itself, since it's in its baby-steps. I look forward to seeing how Buffy is going to take the place down.
Yes, that is what I felt. The early stages of experimentation - dreadful. Spike will be lucky to escape in one piece! New chapter updated now!
kim
11/26/2009 03:41 am
Oh, Spike, of all the places you could have landed! Good luck, Buffy.......seems a little big for the one or two of you.
Sunshine
11/26/2009 12:32 am
I love this story so much! And I am so happy for the update. Thank you!
The nazis are probably making vampires in the consentration camps too, but an army of SSvamps is even worse.. I like how you really combine facts and fiction, and touch upon heavy themes as consentration camps without making it too easy and not too dark either.
And Spike feel betrayed, and Buffy will save him, and somewhere along the way they will stop the nazi vamps and their evil/stupid creators. Great! I take it the story is set prior to the Angel/Spike submarine insident?
Please please write more!
The nazis are probably making vampires in the consentration camps too, but an army of SSvamps is even worse.. I like how you really combine facts and fiction, and touch upon heavy themes as consentration camps without making it too easy and not too dark either.
And Spike feel betrayed, and Buffy will save him, and somewhere along the way they will stop the nazi vamps and their evil/stupid creators. Great! I take it the story is set prior to the Angel/Spike submarine insident?
Please please write more!
It has been difficult to write about these subjects without sounding trite and as if these terrible events are some sort of jolly backdrop to a Spuffy story! I sincerely hope I haven't trivialised the suffering of thousands of ordinary people.
There has been some debate amongst readers as to when this story is set - before or after submarine. Personally I vote for after. Angel is in the States and Spike somehow got himself back to England, met up with Dru and got captured!
I don't think his cavalier attitude to the Nazis in the sub works otherwise.
There has been some debate amongst readers as to when this story is set - before or after submarine. Personally I vote for after. Angel is in the States and Spike somehow got himself back to England, met up with Dru and got captured!
I don't think his cavalier attitude to the Nazis in the sub works otherwise.
Marshmellowed
11/26/2009 12:10 am
*Squeeeels with unbearable delight*
You cruel cruel tease! Another brilliant yet frustrating chapter. I'm so conflicted...the child in me wants Spuffy NOW but the rest of me does not want this to end ever. Well done!
You cruel cruel tease! Another brilliant yet frustrating chapter. I'm so conflicted...the child in me wants Spuffy NOW but the rest of me does not want this to end ever. Well done!
So glad you like the story. Have updated with another chap a few days ago which I hope you have found and also enjoy.
11/25/2009 10:46 pm
Toterin - that is really creepy sounding. Hope our Buffy can save Spike in time.
11/25/2009 09:03 pm
Loved the creepy prison and Walsh was so casually chilling, great atmosphere.. And didn't Buffy make a great spy!
Yes, I think the casual approach to all of this is what makes the Nazi period so horrifying. And I wanted Buffy to be very much action girl. She tends to fade into the background in some stories and Spike ends up doing all the fighting and planning!
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