12/27/2009 12:55 am
In this chapter, you switch back and forth from Buffy's head to Willow's head. Probably would be better to stay with Buffy and have them talk all this out. Also, I think Angel would try to tell Buffy the reason why she has to stay away from Spike. Then, she can tell him he's full of baloney.
Cas
12/03/2009 03:17 am
Timing of Angel's arrival with this big 'problem' just has to make me wonder whether this is just a distraction. Please don't stop posting. I am sure people are reading even if they are not reviewing.
lol You'll find out soon! I promise I won't stop posting, I love this fic and its nice to know that you are too =D I wish more people would review, but I'm happy with what I get. Thanks!!
