Good job on the Cantonese. It makes perfect sense. Only espanol would be as good. Then to add some variety, Russian. I have this idea of Buffy quoting love poetry to Spike in a language he doesn't understand. Or reading Brat'ya Karamazovy in high school.
I do wonder how Buffy's gonna take advantage of Halloween. That's a wonderful one-time opportunity to learn languages at least and maybe other skills or knowledge domains (math? psychology? foreign literature?). Especially since she's got the memory potion. She's probably got French, right?
Then also whether she's gonna guide her friends to take advantage of Halloween. Xander didn't actually use his memories much, although he *could* have. Or is she gonna get to Ethan before he sets everything into motion? (Though it ought to be safe enough if she hangs around his place just before he casts the spell.)
Witchy Buffy might perhaps make some new mistakes; I just hope she get Spike back soon.. Maybe Spike was sent back too? It would solve things easily, and they could keep it secret for a while, to make the story more exciting. Or Buffy must wait for him to get dumped and chipped before she make her moove.. In that case, I hope the story fast forward some.. I want Spike reunion, with some angst and a happy ending.. I like your story, please keep it up..
Oh.. I know what I wish for.. Spike is sent back, but doesn`t know Buffy is back, so they spend some long angsty time trying to wait for each other and keep misinterpretting each other because none of them want to change history too much, in case it would bring them further appart..
Well, cannot wait to see what your plan is... You obviousely have something planned.. Just be kind to Angel, please?
Oooo.. can Spike try to relate and confine in Angel, if he is sent back from L.A?
Ok, I will just have to wait and see..
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