that made me so sad!!!! why did u have to turn buffy!!? naw it was good. i always want buffy to be the chosen  one but i think you wrote for dawn perfectly. and good spuffy sceens. 

I went from "wait Dawn - The Slayer?!?" to "ohmygodIlove" in two minutes flat. Loved this story. Thank you!

I loved this so much :)
cute ending as well, nice to see that despite the lack of soul she still cares
xx