interesting beginning... because that's definitely beginning territory...  and what happened to rescuing Oz?  I can't believe they'd simply abandon the idea of rescuing him...

Whoa!  Gasp.  Hotness.  This works on a basic hormonal level.   No way can Riley compete. 

Great start.

Ok...kinda abrupt but that's par for the course. bravo

very hot, very sweet little fic, your descriptions were perfect, just enough detail, very well put... :) loved it!! :)

Just re-read this. Good rewrite.