West of the Moon, East of the Sun by KnifeEdge
Chapter: Chapter 67: Homecoming

shefelldown
09/24/2010 07:18 pm
this fic has been amazing all the way.  i trust you!  glad buffy was 100% behind spike when they got home.  i'm interested to see how they tie things up with louhi.

09/23/2010 04:37 am
Being as how I'm reading it at the BSV, you hardly need to worry about objections to claiming - even if you were going to do it.

Nicely done chapter. Not too much "ewww Spike!" but no instant acceptance either. And the reactions to how he looked were good. Shame on everybody for not noticing Buffy's condition! And yay for Spike pointing it out.

Hee! And I'm reading this so late tonight that I may find another chapter waiting for me in the morning....

gracie
09/23/2010 04:17 am
Well YAY Pooh!  And I know I've overused the word addictive, but ...  this story is so a d d i c t i v e.  Thanks for writing and looking forward to more

Jeleyne
09/22/2010 09:24 pm
Pooh/Jaws! I love white German Shepherds. So glad to see him make it through the gateway. Interesting that he decided to throw in with Buffy and Spike, first as their transportation and then leaving the hell dimension with them. Does he have a backstory that we don't know yet? As for trusting - well, 67 chapters and you haven't disappointed us yet. That's good enough for me.

Judy
09/22/2010 08:56 pm
 Love the story.  Trust you to take it anywhere you want it to go.

Raye
09/22/2010 06:17 pm
Love, Love, Love it.

I agree that you write Xander pretty tame, for the most part he doesn't do much but talk. I've read stories where Xander is torturing Spike. I'm pretty sure I like your Xander better :-) 

I love that Pooh is back, I was really sad when I thought he wouldn't be able to go back with them.

Sometimes I think that I should wait a week then read the updates of this story, but as soon as that thought leaves I call myself crazy and proceed to wait for the next chapter.

Keep Up the great work.

jorem6
09/22/2010 04:21 pm
Ignore any comments and keep going the way you are, I think its great.

Pin
09/22/2010 03:56 pm
 I really appreciate the pacing of this story; you keep things moving really well and that is hard to do in a long tale.  I love that you saved Pooh and look forward to finding out what he really is and how his commitment to Buffy and Spike will help.  This is a really wonderful story and I'm so glad that you made this commitment to the fanfic community.

BT_
09/22/2010 02:56 pm
YAY Pooh!!!
Ok, I feel really silly that I'm so happy the bear got out of Louhi's hell. 
"Normal, Iowa"?  Taking jabs at Riley now?  :)  Not that I object!

And I trust you to continue telling this story in the way you see it unfolding, no matter what you think your readers might prefer.