Demon Seed by BuffyMeetsSpike
Chapter: Taken

07/09/2011 06:02 am
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I really like this beginning.  It's taut and well paced, with enough tension all around.  I'm enjoying your writing style as well.  Easy, flowing and descriptive.  Good job.
Thanks ever so!

behind blue eyes
03/20/2011 07:50 pm
Really enjoying this start.  Onto the next chapter.

03/13/2011 05:02 pm
Very impressive beginning!  Not betaed you say? Yeah, right:)
Alas, I am my own beta. But then I am my own worst critic as well, so that works out.

SMOKEY56
03/06/2011 06:54 pm
Really looking forward to the next chapter... can't wait. Please give us more of this story soon.
Your wish is my command!

ascii27
03/05/2011 11:36 pm
Awesome start!  Can't wait to read more very, very soon.
Thanks so much for the kind review!

03/05/2011 01:56 pm
Intriguing start. Time for Spike to ride to the rescue!
I guess it's just my way of voicing my wish that Spike would come to MY rescue.

(hope the husband isn't reading these...)

03/05/2011 08:02 am
Great start so far. I eagerly await the next chapter! :)
I eagerly await a free moment, and I will finish the next chapter :)

SeaPea
03/05/2011 05:28 am
Good start.  Let's see where you take this.
Thanks! Working!

03/04/2011 09:56 pm
Yikes!!  Once again Buffy is in trouble and only Spike can rescue her.  I  am so happy to see you gave us another tale.  More please.
Glad to have you tuned in again, MarzBar! I will try to keep you in chapters in short order!

At some point though, I guess I'll have to have Buffy rescue Spike, just to be fair.