DUST by KnifeEdge
Chapter: Chapter 2

01/03/2012 02:44 am
I think I just fell in love with you a little, having Spike sing Nick Cave... too good. So many great things about this chapter; several stand-out lines including this one: "Then there was option three: wander around town and see if she could figure out what had happened—her way; a way that hopefully involved breaking things." Totally made me laugh. The descriptions were all so detailed, like the 2 demons snuggled in the bar asleep in the middle of their fight, it really made the story come alive for me. The concept is so original & the writing so engrossing, I'm betting I stay up til the wee hours catching up on all the chapters. Great work.

07/06/2011 09:11 pm
seriously creepy...  I like it!

Blue
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05/09/2011 02:02 am

Whew - this is Big Trouble.  Great Chapter.  Like the way you have them totally hemmed in, not to mention dumb butt Buffy is going to have to figure it out on her own.  Scary!  :)

05/03/2011 10:59 pm

WOW - this is just so cool!  awesome premise, with characters well done so far and well written.  I can't wait for more!  :)

BuffyMeetsSpike
05/03/2011 08:05 pm
I really like the characterizations! Keep it up!