Out of Reach by Noelle
Chapter: Chapter Two

11/23/2011 02:46 am

Hm Spike is being very rankly.  Surprised he isn't taking advantage of the situation. 

He's too scared of real-Buffy coming back and staking him good and proper!  Thanks for the review :)

Soul of the Rose
09/27/2011 03:20 pm
Lovely, lovely. Solid writing throughout, nice characterization & dialogue. Wonderful premise & great banter between them, even with her memory missing.

Loved this bit:

"When Giles and the gang told me about vampires, I never pictured them lying in a bed reading books.”
 
“Never was one for conformity.” 

Perfect! Thoroughly enjoying this. More soon please!
Spike definitely isn't the cookie-cutter vampire!  Thanks for your lovely review, I'm glad you're enjoying :)

09/27/2011 02:47 am
Love the literal electricity when Buffy and Spike accidentally touch.  Also great description of the various emotions at play in the Magic Shop.
Thanks!

09/26/2011 11:06 pm

great tension between Spike and Buffy, she just knows theres something about him - I like that. Let's see what she learns and how the scoobies can stick their tuppence in. Good update.

Thanks for the review!

Yingxs
09/26/2011 03:34 pm
More please!
It is good to have a Buffy that is without so much hate and prejudice.
Thank you,for writing
Thanks for the review!

09/26/2011 12:25 pm
 You've captured everyone just right - including Willow's desire to 'fix it' with a spell. I love the awkwardness between Buffy & Spike.
Thank you, I always worry about my characterization so I really appreciate your review!

Hana
09/26/2011 08:34 am
This is so clever and a pleasure to read. 
Thanks!