04/15/2012 08:11 pm
Nice, slow, cautious introduction between Buffy and Spike. Very believable. Nicely done.
03/19/2012 06:06 pm
Really not liking the Scoobies this go around from the viewpoint of an aware Buffy. But loved the moments with Spike. I suppose Kendra is not developed enough as a slayer to feel the tinglies. That fight was too close to the "proper" behaving slayer.
Yingxs
03/19/2012 02:52 am
Finally, thank you :-)
That was great and really funny.
And over way too soon .
Angel needed to get his ass kicked,he is always so annoying.
That was great and really funny.
And over way too soon .
Angel needed to get his ass kicked,he is always so annoying.
Eyghon
03/19/2012 01:32 am
This is fantastic! Angel is such a nuisance, and a perv, love what you're doing with him. And Spike, yay for the big B/S showdown, that sounded like fun, I could actually picture it. Looking forward to more, great job.
03/18/2012 11:10 pm
It was creepy having him outside her window. He was perfectly quiet and I don't think he really wanted to talk to her he just wanted to watch her change and see her naked. Otherwise he would have made a noise or knocked on her window as soon as she came in the room. I would have tossed actual holy water at him but that's just me.
