Spikez_tart
04/15/2012 06:33 pm

Great start BBE.  :)  I kind of like Spike using an old fashioned Spanish expression.  He might have learned Spanish in Spain instead of Mexico. 

Thanks, Spikez_tart!  I used an old fashioned Spanish expression since in Season 5 of Angel, when Illyira threw Spike out of the training room he called her a "filthy harlot!" so I decided to keep the Spanish word for harlot in there.  I thought it fit, Spike is over 100 years old after all!

Em
03/29/2012 06:48 pm
I am really looking forward to reading this! Characterization so far is very credible and the synopsis sounds dad interesting!
*blushing* I hope I don't disappoint, Em!  I'm so glad you're on board!  More will be posted on Wednesday.

Joyce
03/28/2012 01:08 am
Enjoyable start!
Welcome back, Joyce!  I'm glad you like.  More will be posted on Wednesday

adrianiling
03/26/2012 01:09 pm

love your story! I thik it's the first time someone writes a fic starting from that point in "lover's walk". I can't wait for the next chapter!
BTW I'm spanish, so I couldn't help but notice your spanish translations. I know you used an online translator so it's not your fault, but some things just sound weird.
For example, "mujerzuela" is a really old fashioned word that means "harlot" or something along those lines; if you wanted to say "slut" it's better that you use "zorra" o "puta" instead.

If you want to leave it just like it is, that's allright; but if you want I'll gladly translate them for you. Just send me a message or an email and I'll do it.

Anyway, great story. I'm looking forward to next chapter.

Adriana.

Thanks so much, sweetie.  And a big thanks for translating for me!  (on-line translators stink!)  I appreciate your help! Big huggers!

Muse
03/26/2012 11:55 am
Interesting story,I really like to know whats happening next :-)
Thank you, Muse.  More will be posted on Wednesday.  Love to know whatcha think!