Great start BBE.  :)  I kind of like Spike using an old fashioned Spanish expression.  He might have learned Spanish in Spain instead of Mexico. 

I am really looking forward to reading this! Characterization so far is very credible and the synopsis sounds dad interesting!

Enjoyable start!

love your story! I thik it's the first time someone writes a fic starting from that point in "lover's walk". I can't wait for the next chapter!
BTW I'm spanish, so I couldn't help but notice your spanish translations. I know you used an online translator so it's not your fault, but some things just sound weird.
For example, "mujerzuela" is a really old fashioned word that means "harlot" or something along those lines; if you wanted to say "slut" it's better that you use "zorra" o "puta" instead.

If you want to leave it just like it is, that's allright; but if you want I'll gladly translate them for you. Just send me a message or an email and I'll do it.

Anyway, great story. I'm looking forward to next chapter.

Adriana.

Interesting story,I really like to know whats happening next :-)