Compliments for the depth of your characters, convincingly built up to gain form beyond a mere 2D identification of “the Tough Slayer”, “the Shy Slayer”, “the Boring Normal Boyfriend” etc. Your characters sound true, as do the original characters (the way Clem tried to swap petrol for eggs for instance. Sounding all supportive and understanding, yet in his agreeable way trying to dissuade Spike from his original plan).
Thank you for giving Buffy and Spike some needed time to grow together again. I’ve never understood after-series-fics in which they experience the initial shock of meeting again, directly followed by a happy 36-hour disappearance into the bedroom... Even if in the end they grew to realise they (still) loved the other, that level of intimacy does not fit the tentative (platonic even) relationship of season 7, let alone the gap of the months / year(s) since.
It’s good to see Buffy true to form, never the damsel in distress to be rescued. Well... she gets distressed a lot, and often could do with a rescue I suppose... : ) But she’s always one to take action solving her own problems even if the rescue-team does arrive to lend a hand... : ) Also very pleased to see a Spike with a little ‘oomph’ to him again, yay!
In short: thank you for a well-written story with a good plot and a nicely chosen ‘Big –but-we’re-serving-the-greater-good- Bad’. I hope you will find the time and / or drive to continue this story, I would very much like to see how it proceeds and ends.
MsJane said: “Anyway, I'm in this gig for one reason only: to entertain the sh*t out of Buffy fans.”I for one was entertained : )
(Double-posting this review both EF and BSV just to be thorough : P)
I could write a lengthy note in appreciation of your taking the time to review this story so many months after the last update, but instead I'll simply let you know that I've returned to the story this week thanks to your review.
I really did miss those crazy two (and my OC's). Let's see if we can't finish this thing.
Thank you.
I can't express how happy I am to see an update, doing my own version of the Snoopy dance.
So..... Looks like Dr Berger's dream subject has turned into her worst nightmare, good, the women's a modern day Dr Mengele no matter how she tries to spin it. I still don't get Shaggy, he seems to be in permanent smug mode. Given his role in the deaths of the Slayers, he deserves more than a kicking. I wonder if the new council has a unit for dealing with rogue watchers, he needs to go down for a long time, he's a bleeding menace. It's great to see the slayers coming together to help Buffy, but I'm hoping they can do it without anymore losses, I really like these girls. Of course Buffy's doing her own bit to help shorten the odds and without missing a quip too, loved the Moby Dick reference. I'm not gonna try and speculate where you're gonna go from here, cos we all know how that turns out, just gonna gird my loins till the next update. Absolutely brilliant, made my day.
I loved sassy Buffy, giving them hell any way she can, never letting up. Super-focused Spike, pulling everything from his bag of tricks to get the job done, was scarily great. It's wonderful that the Slayers are seeing the full package, even more than Buffy has in years. Should be interesting.
I was also pleased to get a bit of Max and Sonny's story, even if just a one-sided slice. Max was terrific, a real hero. I have got to wonder if he is going to lose it when he finds out Spike is a vampire, never mind Buffy's beau. Magic 8 Ball says: definitely.
You've given us great dialogue, exciting action, dreadful villains, lots of lovely character moments and more. Your usual, in other words. You're too good to us.
