Great so far! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Thanks for sharing your talents with the rest of us.
Very good thus far! I like the idea of Spike having the Scoobies on his side (mostly), while Buffy is completlely clueless. . .but then again, Buffy was always clueless where Spike was concerned! It would be great if Angelus got out, and scared Buffy witless, but is stopped before he kills Ms. Calendar. I would like it even more if Angel never gets the chance to claim that he isn't responsible for the things that Angelus did. Angel is in my opinion, the WORST thing that could have happened to Buffy; he destroyed her faith in all males, and convinced her that Spike was a worse vampire than Angelus ever was! I would really love it if Spike managed to embarass Angel/Angelus royally in front of everyone!
Also, Spike needs to buy a clue; he is moping for Buffy, while at the same time, his actions/non-actions are pushing Buffy right into Angel's arms! At this point in time Angel is well over 200 years old, so he is acting like a pedophile going after Buffy like that! Can you tell I don't like Angel much???
Extremely good so far, and I can't wait for the next chapter! Thank you for sharing your talents with the rest of us!