The dialogue is really good. I'm living this with them.

One thing for sure... you are entertaining.... and funny even... and you like to torture your readers. 

that is all.

for now.

blue

 

Bless you girl, that is such a relief, you make a gal feel safe.*sniff* Never want to see Spike hurt. Should've figured he'd want her even it was for a day. I've loved and lost AND ever to have loved at all, and they both SUCK! Great chapter.