Wonderful story. Just got caught up and it was really great. I look foward to the updats and enjoy the interaction between the characters. I love Dawn in this fic. You wrote her so well!

Well this is a good story, moving forward slowly. I'm interested to see how you re-make Spike after this and Buffy for that matter. Both of them will have to change alot for this to work I think.

Cracking update. Think it's gonna take a long time for all of them to heal - I wonder if they have that much time. Concerned about the controller laying around and wondering if Warren will still be putting in a later appearance. Looking forward to more. Thanks.

Wow. Good update. Really liking the interactions between Dawn and Spike. Glad Xander left. Very interesting way to bring the Buffy/Spike situation to light, at least for Dawn. Very cool that Dawn is being the mature adult in the whole thing. She always struck me as the one who would do that. Very curious to see her confrontation with Buffy. Great update. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I'm glad that Buffy admitted to some of her wrongs in front of Dawn, Spike and Xander. Damn Xander for his whole attitude. If Buffy beat the crap out of Spike it was all right, but if Spike laid one finger on Buffy he should be staked. Xander always had such a horrible double standard. I wonder what Spike told Dawn. Is that her resolve face because Spike won't tell her, and she wants to know? Look forward to more.

GRRR Xander. But good on Buffy for admitting what she did to Spike. And it looks as though now she'll explain it all to Dawn too. My heart is still just breaking for Spike. I love the way you are handling this so that it doesn't seem rushed at all. Looking forward to more. -Lisa

So good, so very good...Xander got told, Dawn got told, and Buffy's gonna get it *said in a sing-song voice*--can't wait for the next chapter, sweet--post it soon, before I bust from the anticipation!!!

oh, this is my new crack!fic. You really have no idea! I was practically salivating when I saw you'd put up another chapter. And each one gets better than the last!

What can Buffy tell Dawn? Can she tell him how badly she treated Spike? How she let him think no meant yes over and over again? How she used him? She would have to tell all that stuff first before telling what Spike tried to do to her. That whole thing was a joke anyway. She never was a helpless female. More story please.

Lovely ulpdate. Very sweet interaction between Spike and Dawn. Everyone's reactions felt very true to their characters. I feel really bad for Dawn; looking forward to seeing how her conversation with Spike goes and how she'll view the situation.