Scars by JamesMFan
Chapter: Deal

Sweet. :-)
05/22/2010 09:55 am
 

08/10/2006 01:23 am
go girl!!! i love buffy in this chapter, getting her moxie back!! :) great chatper

04/14/2006 03:46 am
*giggles* Spike as a vamp whore.... pulls out my wallet... now which direction did he go in?

03/26/2006 05:03 pm
Wow. I can’t believe Buffy is actually open to the possibility that Spike has ‘shades of gray’. He’s so… needy, yet not in a pathetic way. Fabulous chapter.

Lou
11/23/2005 05:00 am
Great job with Buffy's resurfacing Buffiness! Love Badass Spike!

Fran
11/23/2005 01:14 am
I don't believe it. In the span of 19 chapters you had Spike going from pure evil to willing to quit killing for a kiss. And it was plausible. You rock. You really have a way with visuals too. I am really enjoying this story. *thumbs up*
hee thanks! That put a smile on my face. I thought you were going to be like "This is impossible! Die!" but you weren't so thank you!

11/21/2005 08:04 am
Guh, how I love this story...Buffy now with shades of gray, and Spike willing to ho himself out for Buffylove...loners, misfits, wanting and needing so much and can't put their fingers on what...I'm sorry for your continued and endless struggles with notepad, but can I just wish most heartily for more story? and hope that the puter gets fixed like, really, really quick?
They're so tortured and angsty aren't they? The freaks. Thanks for reading.

Dee
11/21/2005 04:50 am
I stopped reading this story twice after only 3 chapters because it was a little hard to take and kind of graphic with the burn situation. But, then I told myself to stop being a wuss and give it another try. I am glad I did. This story is very interesting. I love Big Bad Spike way better than that other guy! Looking forward to the rest of the story.
I'm glad you conquered your inner wuss! I try to add a sense of realism to these things and not just try to shock. Although I do love to shock too. Thanks for reading!

Nikkole
11/20/2005 11:37 pm
I am really enjoying this story. this newest chapter was very good! I am also having a hard time seeing Spike working for blood, but maybe Buffy will start getting jealous of the other humans getting his bite? Or she might just start showing up herself! Who knows! Hope you get your computer fixed soon!
Can Spike be trusted in the first place, though? We shall see.

11/20/2005 10:34 pm
Am I an evil person to say I actually like Jeremiah more right now? lol I'm loving the ironic tone of this fic, along with the twisted pain :)
Not evil at all, I like him more right now too! heh.

idk5743228
11/20/2005 11:25 am
I love that you are soldiering on, even with computer issues. Excellent chapter. I don't really see Spike in a vamp whorehouse selling his big bite (so to speak) But I'm sure one does what one must. Hope your computer is up and running soon. I'll wait semi-patiently for another great chapter :)
I do what I can :)

11/20/2005 01:05 am
love your badass spike! Thank you for bringing us another chapter. So very much looking forward to more!!
Thankyou! I'll continue to write like someone on drugs, then!

sue
11/19/2005 04:35 pm
Loved the latest chappie, although the thought of Spike working in the whore house is not too nice. Looking forward to the next chappie and more of this fascinating fic. Thanks.
Spike's a big ho'! heh. I wonder if he'll even get that far... Thanks for reading!

11/19/2005 12:14 pm
O yah! geting better and better.More please. 8^)=
I'll do what I can.

11/19/2005 12:08 pm
This story just keeps getting better. Who is Jeremiah? Are we going to find some civilized vamps? I hope you get a new computer or fix the old one so we can have lots more new chapters.
I hope my computer fixes itself, too. Jeremiah will probably be back soon enough.

ComedyofErrors
11/19/2005 09:06 am
I love how much more 'Buffy' Buffy is in this chapter. And the repartee with Spike is great. Wonderful deal.
That's the effect I was going for. The Slayer is back in town. So to speak. Thanks for reading!

SpaceLord
11/19/2005 07:47 am
This is a very interesting story and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Thank you. I can't wait to have the next chapter done.

~*~Tasha~*~
11/19/2005 07:37 am
Hmmm ... kiss him when he's earned it ... Buffy is really starting to get more of her snark and spine back. Look forward to what you have on tap for us next.
Snarky Buffy is our friend. Yeah, she's back! Or is she? mwhaha! ahem.