12/10/2014 01:39 pm
Hot and hilarious!
06/06/2014 09:21 pm
I wanna be sedated! No, who'm I foolin', I wanna be wild!!
Excellent!
03/30/2010 03:20 pm
09/07/2006 02:36 pm
lol...very excellent little story here...funny and fun and sexy...great job :)
Thanks!
B
04/06/2006 10:07 pm
That was good, sweet and hot. Nicely written to. Really liked it.
Only tiny tiny critism i have, 'Ya' isn't a word. I could deal with it in the speech (although, i prefer 'yeah' or just 'yes') but it was in the narrative as well, and that was really jarring. Yes should be used in the narrative i think.
It was in there right at the beginning and i nearly stopped reading because i thought if someone used that in narrative they would use other slang and non-words and it'd be badly written. I'm glad i read on because this was good, and that little word was the only issue i had. Thought i'd mention it just as something to think about.
Only tiny tiny critism i have, 'Ya' isn't a word. I could deal with it in the speech (although, i prefer 'yeah' or just 'yes') but it was in the narrative as well, and that was really jarring. Yes should be used in the narrative i think.
It was in there right at the beginning and i nearly stopped reading because i thought if someone used that in narrative they would use other slang and non-words and it'd be badly written. I'm glad i read on because this was good, and that little word was the only issue i had. Thought i'd mention it just as something to think about.
Ok, I can understand that, and I respect your right to not like how I write things. I use the word Ya. Ya, it's not exactly 'proper' however, I dislike how 'yeah' is spelt to such an extent that I do not use it, if I can help it. Perhaps it's a flaw, I'm ok with it. Thanks for your opinion, and I'm really glad you liked the fic other than that word.
Oracleholly
12/25/2005 03:30 am
What a great Christmas prezzie for BTL! Excellent ... I wanna play Rock, Paper, Scissors so Spike can come to my house too. *pouts*
hmmm, don't we all...can I have Spike wrapped up and under my tree?
12/24/2005 01:39 am
Great fic, but I still think Buffy needs a spanking :P
lol wulfie you always think Buffy needs a spanking!
~*~Tasha~*~
12/21/2005 05:42 am
Loved this one. Always a treat to read your stories!!
Thanks Tasha! *hugs fellow misfit*
vladt
12/18/2005 03:01 pm
what a lovely christmas present!
Thanks
kat
12/17/2005 02:25 am
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww so sweet lol love holiday stories
Glad you like!
12/17/2005 12:37 am
Teeheehee!! Nice snuggly love making and then RAMONES!! Fun story; thank you for sharing BTL's present with us.
Glad you like!
ComedyofErrors
12/16/2005 11:30 pm
Very sweet; love the finale.
Thanks!
Lou
12/16/2005 09:27 pm
I just love a good dose of the old festive feelings!
Glad you like!
idk5743228
12/16/2005 10:43 am
What a way to spend a cold, snowy christmas evening. Do you think I could get Spike delivered? Merry Christmas, LOL Isabella
lol, Can I have Spike delivered too?
12/16/2005 09:15 am
Oh, I just had to read it again. It was good. *sigh*
And you put it under porn with some plot! *snerk*
It doens't have 'some' plot? I'll argue it has at least 1/4 of a plot...that's still some
12/16/2005 08:19 am
LMAO, poor Spike, Poor Joyce, Evil Buffy, she needs a spanking :->
You always think that Buffy needs a spanking wulfie!