Second Youth by Ariel Dawn
Chapter: Exposition

Strawberries
07/17/2007 02:00 pm
That's nice of you, to let them have the good parts but make the bad parts go away (to prison in this case :P)

That was a nice conversation about Halfrek, the way you describe these things makes them really good to read :)
Thank you!

08/26/2006 06:42 am
wow...that was unexpected...lol..not so much, actually...i hope they can avert the whole deal with the first, that would be great...great chapter :)
Thanks!

02/14/2006 01:46 am
LMAO, at the bacony sex bit :P
Thanks!

Nikkole
01/17/2006 02:41 am
OK, that last line from Anya was just pricless!! Sorry I haven't reviewed until now, I was so into the story that I forgot. Forgive me please?? I really like this story.
Thanks