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What You Wish For by pfeifferpack
Chapter: Chapter 11
alým
03/08/2008 03:28 pm
Lovely chapter:)Liked it and want more:)
Thank you. k
12/15/2007 02:33 am
OH Jenny staying alive i am all for that.
Jenny demanded a larger part in this story than I had originally planned but I think I like her alive and part of the group. k
05/16/2006 08:28 am
this is getting more and more interesting all the time....hope spike's right and angelus doesn't get to jenny this time around...awesome story :)
~*~Tasha~*~
03/23/2006 03:59 am
Nice twist on the timeline's events from the show. I liked the chat with Spike and Angel. Maybe Dru can even be convinced to the side of good. LIke Spike said, she'd do anything for her daddy.
Poor Dru would have done anything Angelus asked of her I think. Thanks. K
02/12/2006 08:10 am
"You’ll see, one day some guy will look at you and just say, ‘who IS that girl?’"--Love that little nod to Oz. And love that Spike is all affection for Jenny. Girl deserves some happiness with Giles. Great chapter.
I had to give Oz a nod.....I loved that character to bits. THank you. K
jane
01/19/2006 04:03 pm
Excellent story really liking it so far.
Thank you...more coming very soon...K
Max
01/17/2006 08:20 am
I really like how Spike isn't letting Angel pull his "it wasn't me it was Angelus" crap. I always thought that Angel was never a champion - EVERYTHING he did was self-serving in at least some way - it was always for some sort of reward for him - first Buffy then his Shansu. The only reason Angel pulled himself out of those rat-filled gutters was because he got it in his head that Buffy was some kind of reward for him like you said. He certainly acted like it. I never got the whole Buffy/Angel deal. I mainly have to say EEEEEWWWW!!!! Buffy was only 15 at that time when Angel first saw her and "fell in love" with her!!!! That's ninth grade, freshman year of high school. EW EW EW EW EW!!! God, that is just plain sick in my book - What the hell was Whedon thinking!? It makes me wonder what all Angel must have done to that gyspy girl before he killed her to get them to curse him when they didn't do anything to Darla, Dru, and Spike for wiping out a good portion of their clan. And Angel was supposed to this "champion" to look up to? I REALLY hate Angel.
I started to like Angel on his own show but never, ever "got" him as a love interest for Buffy. Like you said eeewwww, especially the scene with the lollipop (could it be more of a turn on for a pedophile?). Then again Angelus' big thing was taking innocence...hence, dru, the nuns, the gypsy girl and....I think... Buffy. I think the "perfect happiness" Angel felt wasn't just sex or sex with one he loved, but sex with the ulitmate symbol of good...the Slayer...her innocence.
Thanks.
Kathleen
01/17/2006 04:31 am
i really like this story. For ONCE spike is managing not to screw anything up. Go spike! It's too much to hope for that he continues down this path...isn't it? lol
Stay tuned and see *G*. Thanks, K
Tamara
01/17/2006 03:33 am
It always seemed like Angel was only helping for some kind of reward . First Buffy , then the Shanshu. The period between leaving Buffy and the Shanshu was very small especially when you consider that he never really let go of Buffy.
I think you are right. I suspected his taking on the Black Thorn was his way of forcing the big apocolypse so he'd get that reward...I mean why would he think he could sign it away? He had his selfless moments (on his own show) but yes, the reward mattered.
K
01/17/2006 02:19 am
awesome chapter!!! I love the way this is developing!
Thanks sweetie! Trying to keep this one confined to S1 for the community on the LJ but I may have to add it to my "sequels to do" pile I think. I'm enjoying it too much myself. K
akarinacj
01/17/2006 12:20 am
As always, loved the chapter.:-)
But, Buffy not knowing that Spike is a vampire is making me nervious... :-)
Update soon, please.
This is a more accepting Buffy remember! This is the one that loved Angel in spite of his bumpies. Thank you. K
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