Second the First by SinisterChic
Chapter: Oh, You Again

08/17/2006 02:44 pm
wow...this could get traumatic for all parties concerned....great chaptter though :)

06/14/2006 01:34 am
Regarding your AN (Velvet), you could make her a potential. Interested?

Btw, still got me. keep it up.

vladt
06/13/2006 05:01 am
fine chapter. thanks for the read. good luck with velvet. like what you done so far.

05/14/2006 07:42 pm
Give her to Giles.....he needs somebody after all unless she turns out to be gay then Kennedy can have someone to scare ...er...love. If she wants a demon there's always Clem! Maybe Angel's lonely.......Wes?

No matter, the story is shaping up nicely and I am enjoying it all.

Kathleen

~*~Tasha~*~
04/08/2006 06:11 pm
Ohmy gosh!! Those two are going to go nuts. Spike and William switching back and forth like that. As for Velvet ... I like her, but I don't like her and William or Spike being together. So, I don't care what happens to her one way or the other. {winks} I think she was an awesome OC that took care of William and stuff. Maybe they can all be friends?

Wicked Angel/Cass
01/20/2006 12:43 pm
Hey! I figured out how to review! I'm not a complete moron then. -lol- Anywho, loved "Replay." *Adoring* "Second the First." Velvet... I dunno. Kinda... hmm... Maybe you could have her eventually join the Scooby Gang for some reason? Doesn't sound like she's got too much goin' for her in Indiana. Maybe California holds better prospects. Or there could be some reason for Angel to come down! And he brings his whole crew, and she bonds with them (*hint hint* Fred). Eh, just some ideas. Anywho, I'm loving the switches from Spike to William. Especially the last one. -lmao- Man, that's good. Poor William. -lol-

SpaceLord
01/19/2006 07:23 am
Hmm now they will need to merge william and Spike. As for Velvet I can only say 3 way action, that will keep everybody happy :)

01/18/2006 04:48 pm
William and Spike are going to have to learn to get along with each other and share Buffy. Maybe Velvet will like Clem. More story please.

idk5743228
01/17/2006 10:16 pm
I see 2 options, do the back and forth with Spike and that would keep Velvet in the loop. You know kind of a Jr. Scoob or you could bring the 1st into the mix, sacrifice poor, clueless Velvet and set William on his way back to being Spike. Anyway you see the future chapters, I'm sure will be great.

01/17/2006 02:08 pm
Oh swappy Spike and William. Good things could come from this split personality. Can't wait to see what.

01/17/2006 12:02 pm
kill the bitch...just kidding. Threesome? Ok i'm being naughty now lol. I like this going back and forth, this should prove interesting lol.

neo_trinityknot
01/17/2006 11:20 am
Ignore her and maybe she will go away...Great chapter.
Ha! I can be like those cit-coms and just not write her in anymore and hope no one notices she is gone. The trouble is, I created her but didn't have a plan as to her role in the larger picture.