12/21/2007 06:46 pm
OH this is interesting.
05/18/2006 06:06 am
ooohh....creepy...need more now ;)
05/10/2006 01:04 am
ohhh insidious and evil - I likey! What a great concept and brilliantly written prolgue. Wonderful Sweetie!
04/28/2006 02:46 pm
whose the girl?
Poor girl - she was just a random victim to the things that go bump in the night.
04/23/2006 06:40 pm
What an intriguing, sinister start. You did a fantastic job of describing a living nightmare.
*Blushes* thank you - have to admit I wanted to have a very creepy setup - cos fairytales usually we creepy weren't they!
Fantasic Job! YAY! thank you!
Fantasic Job! YAY! thank you!
04/23/2006 06:32 pm
A gnarled arthritic hand erupted from her stomach - I hate it when that happens. You aren't doing all these creepy things to Buffy are you, mean writer?
LOL me too! That handinthestomachitus is just a pain isn't it! Nope no creepy things to Buffy.......errrrr yet *g*
Hope you enjoyed the rest of the chappies!
Hope you enjoyed the rest of the chappies!
kim
04/23/2006 01:52 pm
Ooooo, majorly scary. Much with the eep! and oh, dear!
And Dawnie will be caught in this, too?
And Dawnie will be caught in this, too?
Oh yes Dawn will be caught up in this I promise - am glad the scray bits worked was worried the creepfactor might not have been enough.
Thank you for reviewing more chappies to come during the day.
Thank you for reviewing more chappies to come during the day.