Wonderful early Sunnydale story - now that most writers are only working with the later seasons and the comic books and all human - these early season stories are more important than ever as a representation of the history of Buffyverse fanfiction. 

I loved your Cordelia and I also liked that Xander and Spike were not constantly snarking at one another and on the road to being friends.  Great reading this one a second time.  

Great reading this one again - I enjoyed having the original gang have a good relationship with Spike.  Also, while I hate that Cordelia hard to go through the Angelus change, I like how you turned that horrible experience into this stronger fighter Cordy.

This was really unexpected.   I really enjoyed the early intro of Spike and the turn of events with Angelus and Cordy was interesting as was her development.  I'm a big fan of Cordy, so that was a nice addition.  I really liked this a lot.  I enjoyed the relationship with Spike and Xander as well as Spike and Giles, not to mention the Spuffy, of course.  I'd love to see a sequel if you've done one...  this is a universe worth revisiting.

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enjoyed reading your work - I liked your Cordelia too - and I sure hope that you have a sequel.

Nice Work

 

OH I loved it. Did you ever do the sequel

Fantastic!! Loved that ender, sweetie, and can't wait until the sequel is up. Great fic!

Definitely more! This was great. Loved that Spike came and stopped the Buffy/Angel thing. Although I felt bad for Cordelia. Keep up the good work. There's a number of ways you could go with this story. Maybe a claim?

Great story. I like season 1 fics with Spike in 'em, and this one was great.

Wow! What a story. You really managed to keep my interest the whole way. Thanks for an exelent fic.

awesome ending to an awesome story...quite impressive show, love :) thanx

Very unique outlook and storyline for Season 1. Excellent written. Glad that we got an epilogue. {Smiles}

very entertaining tale. cordie was great and spike&buffy a joy to read. thanks for the fun read.

Very cool maneuver with the fire! Excellent fic all around, Schez.

The ingenious spell made for a fitting climax. An excellent romp.

great story - I really enjoyed it and found the concept bery intruiging - thank you for the ficcie!

Sequal????

And damn YOU have a WIP finished???

Bloody hell who would have thunk it :P

Eeee! Yay! But why couldn't angel and dru be dusted too *sighs*

Great story. Loved it, it was good that you changed a lot of what heppened in this season more than just rewrite it with Spike in it.