Of Light And Shadow by FetchingMadScientist
Chapter: Blueshift

09/21/2006 06:42 am
oh i hope dawn wises up the moment she sees him, if not before...poor spike, how very sad this all is for him...
Changing is painful. But, he knew that going in. And still, he did it. What is the meaning of a champion, again? :)

Verda
07/14/2006 06:15 am
This is wonderful, absolutely incredible and thankfully a chapter that can breath easier with. Yes, maybe now Dawn will start to see things a little clearer. Thanks for this great chapter.
Sometimes you need a beather. :)

sirc
05/07/2006 09:29 am
great chapter
thanks.

Robyn
05/07/2006 08:17 am
Starting with the end, I love the outside perspective of Aunt Darlene about Spike and the very important lesson she is trying to teach Dawn. I loved hearing Willow's thoughts on what she had done and how it didn’t help her with her pain, and her realization that she was no better then Spike, the individual she had considered completely evil. I felt so bad for Spike and his nightmares of Buffy’s death by Warren. And I love the help that Lydia is trying to give those in Africa. Thanks for another great update.
It's always easier to see what's really going on if you're not mixed up in the emotions of the moment. Thanks for reading.

vladt
05/07/2006 03:29 am
very good read. crammed alot in to this update. dawn's aunt sounding like joyce; red actual seeing how far she has to go; buffy being blond; and lydia being very brave. thanks for the fine read.
Well they all have to grow and change. And she is Joyce's sister. Why wouldn't they sound alike?

~*~Tasha~*~
05/07/2006 02:31 am
Go Aunt Darlene ... set that brat of a Key sister straight. I hated how Dawn turned on Spike. Yes, she heard what Xander told her, but she never tried to take what Buffy said and let it go. Dawn, of all people, should have known that Xander would turn things any way he wanted it to make Spike look the worst.

Another excellent chapter. You are bringing all things together in a unique plot that I am enjoying reading.
I think part of Dawn's extreme reaction had to do with a tiny *crush* she had on Spike. "Love makes you do the wacky," doesn't it?

Lou
05/07/2006 01:52 am
Please put Dawn out of her misery. It'd be a mercy!
I agree, she's stupid. But to do something that drastic? Surely you jest.

arba
05/07/2006 01:46 am
There is a typo on the summary. It's canon, not cannon. They have a completely different meaning.
Fixed now...thanks.

05/07/2006 12:55 am
Yes Dawn listen to auntie!

Am I sensing an alliance with the Initiative clowns? Yeah to Lydia for the heads up BTW.

Wondering about those dreams of Spike's....Warren????

Great job as always.

Kathleen
Maybe she will. Nope there is no alliance. But it doesn't look good for Spike unless Giles gets that wire in time. *Crossong fingers* Here's hoping! Spike went to a demon, you think maybe said deamon let him see things he knew would be painful for Spike?

Miss Rose
05/07/2006 12:29 am
Good for Lydia! I like the way you're portraying her. The scene when those beetles crawled into Spike's nose and ears was so creepy, no wonder Spike is having nightmares about it. I couldn't agree more with Willow's assessment about her actions, especially her coming to the conclusion that Spike is a better person than her. Aunt Darlene seems like a nice lady, I hope Dawn listens to her. Wonderful chapter!
I knew what they were supposed to be, the beetles, when I first saw the ep. I knew what they ate and what Spike was, and I thought,"That's gotta hurt." It's about time Willow faced up to what she did. Don't you think?

05/07/2006 12:24 am
Dawnie issues r being addressed i see. i think i like Buffy's aunt
Yep. I like Darlene too.

kim
05/07/2006 12:20 am
Growing up is painful - you made wonderful, accurate illustrations of exactly that, here. A turning point for so many.

And adding that conversation with Aunt Darlene is genius. You keep managing to bring up little throwaway tidbits from the series, like a name, and making them relevant...enriching the 'verse.

It's still weird to me that Xander's dead, just because people rarely take that choice to have Willow go that way. I think it was a good call, though. It adds even more impact on Willow's recovery, taking away the crutch he'd been for her...and removes the obstacle he often represents.

And Buffy thinking poachers wouldn't be on a nature preserve....LOL....try reading National Geographic once in a while, kiddo. How did she blind herself so badly to common human scumbags? Sure, every soul has the potential to make good choices, but there's still free will - it is a bitch. ;)
As much as I like Willow, her behavior creeped me out and I thought I should deal with it. Why mention an Aunt if you're never going to use her again?

DeanSamWinchesterfan
05/06/2006 11:57 pm
Stupid Dawn,acting all bratty.I'm still in shock from Supernatural's season finale. Update soon.
Let's face it. Dawn was a brat.