02/06/2007 07:02 pm
Wow - what a start!
08/21/2006 12:38 am
Amazing! So completely original. Excited to find out what this is all about. Excellent beginning, can't wait to catch up. Thanks for the exciting read.
Isabel
06/19/2006 06:03 am
I love it when I first chapter makes me eager to read the rest of the story. Great start. I don't know why I haven't started reading this story before. The summary sounded interesting. I'm glad I gave it a try tonight.
05/21/2006 02:49 am
I am enjoying the premise of this first chapter - I can't wait to see what happens and why the police are arresting Buffy,
05/18/2006 03:42 am
No, listen, see – he was a vampire - That explanation always works. Poor Buffy, just when you thought it couldn't get any worse an Evil Writer comes along. Interesting start.
Nikkole
05/17/2006 11:06 pm
Hmmmmmm, interesting. I wonder what the heck happened in transit.
Nikkole
05/17/2006 11:06 pm
Hmmmmmm, interesting. I wonder what the heck happened in transit.
05/12/2006 01:08 am
Very intriguing - I like this first chapter and can't wait to see where you take this!
05/12/2006 01:08 am
Very intriguing - I like this first chapter and can't wait to see where you take this!
05/11/2006 09:44 pm
Whoa, you have me completely confused and engrossed.
05/09/2006 10:39 pm
whoa what happened? Totally fantastic first chapter. i'm hooked already.
Lilachigh
05/09/2006 06:14 pm
So pleased the writer’s block has been dissolved. Love the beginning of this one. I am hooked already.
05/09/2006 12:39 pm
OMG?!?! please update!!!!
N
05/09/2006 11:35 am
very interesting start, hope to see more of it soon.
05/09/2006 07:53 am
Weird! She's not in Sunnydale any more. More story please.
vladt
05/09/2006 06:43 am
great opening chapter. your past tales tell me this will be a wonderful read. thanks
05/09/2006 06:34 am
awesome start...cant wait to see where you take it from here :)
Richard
05/09/2006 04:22 am
OMG, this is AWESOME.
And a hearty thank you for pointing out that large numbers of people really do win over individuals.
And a hearty thank you for pointing out that large numbers of people really do win over individuals.
kim
05/09/2006 03:43 am
Whoa...she ended up somewhere that vampires have become good guys...
Typical Buffy, though, act first and ask questions when everyone's dead.
Typical Buffy, though, act first and ask questions when everyone's dead.
Jess Marie
05/09/2006 03:20 am
This is one of the most original ideas I've read in forever. Really excited to see where it goes.
05/09/2006 02:26 am
OMG what the hell is going on! I love the beginning and cant wait to see where you go from here.