In Pieces by Ariel Dawn
Chapter: Broken

smlcspike
02/28/2007 03:24 am
I just found this it looks good.
Thanks!

01/16/2007 06:06 am
that was a wonderful read, thank you.
Thanks for reading!

01/14/2007 01:04 am
Hah hah, she shouldn't have any problem with brown hair under the circumstances. How did Spike know?
He's just observant like that :)

Lou
01/13/2007 11:22 pm
What a start!! Fabulous dumping and Buffy being nice to Spike!
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01/13/2007 08:07 pm
ooooo, love the start ad.
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01/13/2007 07:31 pm
Lovely start. Yup, Spike would have put two and two together once he sobered up a bit. Wish Buffy would have turned to him like in this story. Look forward to more.

Kathleen
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01/13/2007 06:13 pm
How cute was Buffy's insistance that Spike would know her right away, and her glee that she was right and he could tell the difference. Yeah I knew Riley was going to get kicked to the curb as soon as he revealed he couldn't identify his own girlfriend
Ya, I'm not a big fan of Riley, can you tell?

Cas
01/13/2007 01:33 pm
Is that all that got switched, or are we going to see a few new personality traits too? Very cute.
You'll have to read on to find out

01/13/2007 12:12 pm
Great chapter, hope there will be more soon.
Thanks!

01/13/2007 10:11 am
Leave it to Buffy to worry about the nose. Riley needs a clue. Maybe a clue-by-four to beat him over the head with?
hehehehehe

01/13/2007 08:11 am
hehehe. I like this. Very different. And a very likely way Willow's spell could have ended up. I love her statement that she knew Spike was her favorite vampire for a reason. haha
Thanks for reading!

01/13/2007 08:11 am
hehehe. I like this. Very different. And a very likely way Willow's spell could have ended up. I love her statement that she knew Spike was her favorite vampire for a reason. haha
Thanks!

01/13/2007 08:08 am
That's awesome! What a great idea for a fic. The dialogue flows very well, and the voices sound right too. This has the makings of one of those fics that I always wished someone would write - and never knew it.
aww that's so sweet! Thanks!

01/13/2007 05:32 am
Hee-hee! When I first read the summary, I thought, what? Buffy's gonna have psychotic tendencies now, and Faith's gonna have a stick up her bum? But this was hilarious! Of course, I think some parts of their personalities smooshed, cause Buffy's apparently grooving on the Spike-train, just as Faith was in the Bronze. Intriguing. Thanks for writing!
Thanks for reading!

01/13/2007 05:04 am
lol i can imagine what they would look like.. Good on spike for figuring it out!
yep, yay spike!

01/13/2007 04:10 am
Oooooh! Now here's a plot idea that I've never seen. Can't wait to see what happens.
Thanks!

Richard
01/13/2007 04:05 am
This is delightful and it's got so much potential. Though the thing that came to mind with the summary was personality changes. :)
oh there is more to come!