03/24/2007 02:01 pm
I love this story and look forward to the next chapter. I look forward to the interaction between the sisters and Dawn and Spike as well. I love stories in this arc alot.
Kim Adams
Kim Adams
03/21/2007 11:27 pm
great beginning and a very good read. thank you.
Kate
03/21/2007 03:12 pm
OMG...awesome chapter!! I absolutely love where this is going so far. More! More! :) I'm so glad you leave the church scene/speech alone until it went AU. I hate it when writers rework scene from the actual show because to me you can't beat what was already written and shown on screen. I loved, however, that you added Buffy's internal thoughts into the scene. Worked very well. Finally, the scene at the end with Buffy and Dawn is always how I dream their relationship should've gone during season 7. I think it was hinted at but then got waylaid by all the potentials taking Buffy's focus off Dawn. Next chapter, please! lol
Pin
03/21/2007 02:18 pm
Great start; I like the way this is going - much more thoughtful than canon. Thanks!
03/21/2007 06:27 am
Gret beginning, can't wait to read more.
Wonder how Spike will react when Buffy tells him she's in love with him?
Wonder how Spike will react when Buffy tells him she's in love with him?
