Decoy by Isabel
Chapter: Digging for the truth

Way cool. :-)
05/21/2010 03:51 pm
 

Brunettepet
06/18/2008 06:16 pm
 I'm enjoying Lazarus' easy teasing.  He and Spike are an excellent team.  Spike being self aware of how crap he is at plans gave me a grin.  He's right, he is more a seat of his pants type of vamp.

Your attention to detail on the road toward Sunnydale and at the base camp made this chapter vivid and entertaining.  Spike's break in was tense, and I'm still uneasy at the ease of his obtaining a uniform and getting Buffy's file.  Is he being set up?

Time for another chapter or two, so maybe I'll see!
It was such an amazing thing to open my account today to find out you had left me all these wonderful reviews. Thank you so much, you have no idea how much it means to me.
And about this chapter... yes, Spike was just THAT lucky. Or, the army was just that unorganized and you'll find out much later in the story why exactly that is.

05/30/2008 11:45 pm
Cool  action Spike with the Viper, love it!
Black Viper... Dark and flashy, just like Spike ;) Thanks for your review.

DeanSamWinchesterfan
04/05/2007 05:09 pm
Good chapter.Update soon.I can't wait until Spike finds Decoy!Buffy.
Thank you! Love your user name by the way ;)

04/05/2007 08:23 am
spike at his best. very good read, thank you.
No, thank you lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing. You have no idea how much I appreciate it.

infinitecrisis
04/04/2007 07:14 pm
Plot getting thicken. Is the military planning to capture Buffy or her friends? Will Finn make an appearance? Also, Finn is way too young to make into a captain if he was in his early 20s in BTVS. Please give us more mystery and suspense.. adventure and action. I am seeing a potential here. Thanks!

Here, is nothing to do with the story but Initiative made US military looks bad in BTVS. Few bad eggs had cost some reps in the best organization in the world. Those bad eggs should be taken out and not fit to serve. Wankers. "We, Army Strong". Hoo ah!
I don't write Riley Finn. Just writing is name gives me a rash. If I include him in my story, I'll have nightmares. Of all the characters I hate, this one is the absolute worst. But he might get mentioned, probably even in the next chapter. But I haven't decided yet if I want to go that way. We'll see. I know they made the military look bad. I don't think Joss likes the police and the military. The police officers in Sunnydale were stupid, and the military evil. According to what I read so far in the comic book, the military is still somewhat evil AND stupid. But I'll tone it down, don't worry. I'll update soon.

04/04/2007 06:29 pm
Kinky bonding games - LOL! Hey, seriously, I'm loving this post-Chosen, post-NFA scenario, and I like your OC friend for Spike.
Lazarus says thanks lol. He likes him too. Looks at himself in the mirror every morning and blows himself kisses. Selfobsessed little yellow demon that he is. Glad you like it.

04/04/2007 04:15 pm
I’m still enjoying this so much. I think this Spike is the best you’ve done so far. Really good.
You like him? Yeah, I think I'm getting better and better at writing him. Or at least, I hope so. Thank you.

04/03/2007 07:27 pm
well, i'm glad he at least got out of there okay...and something about the description of the girl makes me think she might play into things later...wonder that that file's going to say ... great chapter, love, looking forward to reading more :)
Maybe she'll show up again later. You never know. Thanks for your review. Won't be too long for an update.