Drenched by Verity Watson
Chapter: Ch. 13: The Resolute Urgency of Now

09/07/2007 03:31 am
I always like when Buffy gets put in her place, and being part demon is just the way to do it! I do hope they grab Willow, will she's getting her "fix"! She needs to get a grip as well. They all went off the deep end that season. Now to see what's Spike up too.
Glad you liked the "part demon" explanation. Always thought that the Slayer's origins were poorly explained - this is my private guess as to how they super-charged a girl.

sue
06/15/2007 05:05 pm
Just read all thirteen chapters at a sitting. You've taken canon, changed bits here and there and developed Spuffy a WHOLE lot, although still in keeping with their combative interraction, both in and out of bed. You have Spike to a tee.

The dialogue is sharp and the action well-paced, and the inclusion of Britta, well - it's a great read!

Please, please update soon.

05/12/2007 03:22 pm
oh man...something tells me there's a chance for this britta to come around, and maybe they will end up on the same side...my heart breaks for poor spike, though, how painful, the way she's treating him, but very true to the season 6 relationship...great chapter, love :)

ElyseNotElsie
05/11/2007 10:37 pm
I just started following this one and God!- the story line is amazing, the dialogue is totally in-character, and I am riveted. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Thanks, Elyse! So glad you're enjoying.

05/10/2007 11:18 pm
Terrific chapter in a brutal way. And sadly all too believable -- Buffy's such a mess and now she's pushing Spike to the limit. Great angst!

05/10/2007 11:18 pm
Terrific chapter in a brutal way. And sadly all too believable -- Buffy's such a mess and now she's pushing Spike to the limit. Great angst!

05/10/2007 10:36 pm
don't stop now!!!
Wouldn't dream of it! ;)

infinitecrisis
05/10/2007 09:55 pm
the chapter is the worst from the rest sorry. good writing, but bad plot. maybe she should kill spike and end his misery as a rapist

05/10/2007 09:19 pm
very good read, thank you. the anti-council seems to have some flaws in its mission statement. even buffy sees that something is not right.

smlcspike
05/10/2007 08:40 pm
Oh I hope Spike gets to her in time.

05/10/2007 07:26 pm
Oh so intriguing. Love the anti Council group. This is the support the Slayer really needs (and I always thought the Cruciamentum was a way of getting rid of sexually mature Slayers for a hidden reason.).

Excellent.

Kathleen
Thanks, Kathleen. The Cruciamentum needs *some* kind of explanation doesn't it? One of the Buffyverse things that I could never make sense of ... thank goodness for fanfic. ;)