Torn by Smudgiboo
Chapter: First Impressions

Well done. :-)
07/09/2010 03:49 pm
 

07/12/2007 01:34 am
Great to know that she's already lusting after him, but I was hoping that she had memories of Dawn too. So hard for her to discover that Joyce was gone. Lost her mother but gained a sister, all in one night. I see Willow's going to be the same here.

06/09/2007 01:57 am
“No, Xander saved you that night. He has told me about it many, many times - LOL - Starting to feel very sorry for Anya.

Liked the way Dawn is brave and the rest of them too cowardly to tell Buffy about her mother.

Spiffy
06/07/2007 03:58 am

06/06/2007 02:24 pm
Nice to see Xander his usual charming self -- we always leave your sister with an evil soulless vampire! Tough times ahead for Buffy, at least Spike has a chance this time round!

Curtis Gardner
05/29/2007 04:21 pm
The story so far is great. Keep up the good work.

05/27/2007 06:40 am
Harsh. I take it Dawn is a one agonizing rip kind of medical tape remover.

05/27/2007 06:24 am
WOW great chapter! I hope THIS Buffy will beable to adjust better than the other one did,, so far so good,,, so wouldn't that make her and Dawn almost the same age???

PyroChilde
05/27/2007 03:25 am
Aw, so sad! Awesome chapter though. :) More please :D

Izzy
05/26/2007 05:31 pm
This story is getting really interesting! I can't wait to see young Buffy and this new gentle Spike together, and Dawn thinking of them as a family. Without past prejudice, Buffy can see just how amazing Spike is for a vampire. I do hope Angel turns up and wants to get Buffy to swoon over him before nobly walking away again, just because I love seeing him get shot down and have Spike picked first!! Spuffy forever, update soon!

05/26/2007 03:52 pm
So much for good friends. They didn't want to tell Buffy that Joyce is dead.

05/26/2007 03:06 pm
oh man...she's not going to take this well...this is so full of powerful, intense, complicated emotion, and i love it...i can't wait to see how this all plays out, and i like the fact that this younger buffy probably still wont have the need to please her friends so much like the older one did...i really can't wait for the update ;)

jane
05/26/2007 01:18 pm
Interesting, looking forward to more

Gillypod
05/26/2007 11:39 am
Oh honey, this is just getting better and better. I can't honestly wait to see how this will pan out. Will she be angry at her friends for bringing her back? Will she fall in love with Spike without all the crap that seems to go with it? Will she still think she loves Angel just because she did when the Master was on the scene? Oh the possibilities. Please update soon sweetie, I need it.

05/26/2007 08:39 am
ugh, stupid intervening scoobies... pfft... bring back the hot vampire :)

05/26/2007 01:40 am
Just love the chapter. And it was too cute to see young Buffy drewling after Spike. Just glad that Dawn is there to keep them all on the straight and narrow. If she is going to get the chance to tell the truth she is going to take it.

05/26/2007 01:14 am
Poor Buffy, Dawn could have waited till tomorrow to give her THAT piece of information.

05/26/2007 12:50 am
love buffy,s reaction to spike. glad dawn tries to be the responsible one, while all the scoobies want to run home and deal later. thank for the fun read.

05/25/2007 11:57 pm
This is very good. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. And drooling over Spike when she was "totally" in love with Angel at that point? How are you going to reconcile that?