Decoy by Isabel
Chapter: Hero of the people, enemy of the State

Brunettepet
06/18/2008 06:27 pm
 Sorry for leaving this twice, I forget I'm not logged into this site.

Nearly getting captured was very entertaining, and Spike and Lazurus' escape was vivid and exciting.  Spike bemoaning the bullet holes, shots caused by his own lingering at the Hellmouth, was very amusing, and I loved Clem deflecting his ire by pointing out he was bleeding all over the Viper's seats.  

Spike's dream flash back was very moving, and he's right, Buffy didn't get the acclaim she deserved.  This new investigation just adds insult to injury.
Glad you enjoyed the excitement. It was a fun chapter to write. I really like writing Clem and Lazarus. It's always fun when someone makes fun of grumpy Spike... in a friendly way of course ;)

06/18/2008 06:26 pm
 Nearly getting captured was very entertaining, and Spike and Lazurus' escape was vivid and exciting.  Spike bemoaning the bullet holes, shots caused by his own lingering at the Hellmouth, was very amusing, and I loved Clem deflecting his ire by pointing out he was bleeding all over the Viper's seats.  

Spike's dream flash back was very moving, and he's right, Buffy didn't get the acclaim she deserved.  This new investigation just adds insult to injury.

DeanSamWinchesterfan
06/14/2007 05:24 pm
Good chapter.Update soon.At least Spike is asking Angel to fix the "Buffy is a terrorist thing". The stupid government is being helped by all the Slayers.They're getting rid of all the magical creatures that they tried to do experiments on.

06/12/2007 11:31 pm
I'm so glad to see you updated this! I hate it when fics I like die on the vine...

06/12/2007 08:09 pm
sounds like spike has a plan. that usually works so well. very good read, thank you.

06/12/2007 07:19 pm
like angel's response.... :) great chapter, glad they managed to get away, and with the file...can't wait to see what happens next :)

Tamara
06/12/2007 01:02 am
The precense of Initiative soldiers certainly explains where they got Buffy's name . And you'd think after dying and saving the world , they'd stop calling him Hostile 17.