Torn by Smudgiboo
Chapter: Chapter 5

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07/09/2010 03:59 pm
 

07/22/2007 07:07 pm
Like the way Buffy is actually nice to Spike. Also, Willow needs a smack. Hope you'll deliver.

07/15/2007 03:25 pm
Keep going.

07/13/2007 08:18 pm
Good chapter. See Willow is up to her usual tricks.

Curtis Gardner
07/13/2007 02:06 pm
I love this story.

07/13/2007 04:50 am
red has major issues. but provides great material for your tale. very good read, thank you.

07/13/2007 12:48 am
Wicked Willow, when will she learn? Great story, I'm looking forward to more updates soon.

07/12/2007 10:14 pm
Another great chapter! You got Willow perfectly.

07/12/2007 09:29 pm
Awww, tender moment and trust between Spike and the younger Buffy. Very sweet. Gotta love how they would be together, if Buffy hadn't been so jaded.

07/12/2007 08:44 pm
Oh yes, God playing Willow the all knowing all seeing one! She and Angel would have been a fine pair LOL.

Excellent update. Hope they keep THIS Buffy and leave the other to heaven.

Kathleen

07/12/2007 08:03 pm
meddlesome Willow. Can't she just learn that she needs to leave tings alone?

07/12/2007 04:23 pm
Willow has that whole "I can fix it, no, really this time" vibe going strong right now. Somehow, I think poor Tara is going to get caught in the crossfire.

07/12/2007 03:30 pm
Willow doesn't like the Buffy she got and wants a refund... *shakes head* BAD Willow

07/12/2007 02:40 pm
Stupid Willow, can't she just listen to Tara? She's not God.

07/12/2007 01:16 pm
oh boy she just cant' leave well enough alone!


Great chapter!

07/12/2007 03:24 am
Gah! DIE WILLOW DIE!

akarinacj
07/12/2007 03:04 am
Nice chapter. Thank you for the update. I was looking forward to read it. Please update soon.

07/12/2007 02:37 am
oh that is not good.

07/12/2007 01:54 am
More Lethe's bramble for Tara, I'm sure! Now Spike can train with Buffy, Giles and Xander might not like it but it will help keep her safer. Besides they all know that he loves her, though Xander doesn't want to admit it. Really enjoying this, since I'm all for a happy Spike, it's great! Thanks for the update, looking forward to more.

07/12/2007 01:53 am
oh man, willows gonna mess everything up, isn't she? *sigh* that girl never learns...i hope she doesn't mess things up for buffy and spike, who are just now starting to finally be happy...great chapter, love :)

07/11/2007 11:29 pm
Great depiction of Willow's determination to be right. Still very scarey, too. I like your younger Buffy, much less damaged than the later version. Great story. Thanks!

Tamara
07/11/2007 11:19 pm
Willow , is such a control freak. She can't even stand for Buffy to drink a different soda than the one she thinks Buffy is supposed to be drinking!

Izzy
07/11/2007 10:38 pm
I am so glad that this has updated! As soon as I saw it on the Most Recent List, I couldn't wait.
Of course Willow can't stand that she might've messed up a spell. So she can fix it-- with another spell. I can imagine Spike's response to that!
I am really enjoying Spike and young Buffy interacting. Spike gets to bring out the sweet side of himself that he usually doesn't get the chance to with all the insults flying at him. Buffy thinks of the chip not working so simply, and I'm sure Spike falls more in love with her just for that. Dawn is definitely looking for that match, and I know she'd be delighted Spike can defend himself, unless the chip only doesn't work on Buffy. I look forward to Willow and Xander's reactions the most, though. Stupid, hyprocritical bigots. Without living through the same things, hearing about them and able to think them through without prejudice, it sounds like young Buffy can see all the changes in her friends and how arrogant or angry or close-minded they've become. I wonder what the consequences would be if Willow did try a spell to affect someone from the PAST? She's usually smart, but who knows?
Can't wait to read more! Spuffy all the way! :)