Shadows of a Brighter Day by Eowyn315
Chapter: Not Like This

11/15/2007 02:40 am
*sigh* I was beginning to suspect at the beginning of the chap that something was wrong with Buffy and that is why Willow had phoned him, now well, I'd say it's pretty much confirmed. You're relly gonna rip my heart out here, aren't you? Still loving the angst by the way... and their reunion was beautiful, if somewhat heartbreaking.
Yeah, ripping out of hearts is pretty much the name of the game... can't have a reunion without a little foreboding. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

08/18/2007 12:31 am
Oh, great! She's going to die? She is right, it will destroy him, if she does. Does Xander know? Guess I'd better keep reading to find out. Wonderful Spuffy moments, just how many more do they have?
Lots of questions... Thanks for the review!

07/26/2007 07:15 pm
and they still do not communicate. at least they got the make up sex out of the way, so it is time for new issues. very good read, thank you.
Might have been smarter to do the making up *before* the sex, but hey, it's all good. :)

07/24/2007 03:32 am
Beautiful chapter. You left it a place where I completely just want more.

I read a few of your fics over at Elysian Fields, and I just wanted to let you know that I love everything you've written. I can't wait until I read the next update for this story, and for all of your others!
Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying my stories. It's nice to hear that it leaves you wanting more. :)

07/23/2007 06:12 am
what does she know? what's she so afraid of? now i'm all nervous, oh that was a truly heinous cliffie, love...but a brilliant chapter, loved it :)
Sorry to have made you nervous... and then leave you hanging until I get back from vacation. :) But I'm glad you liked the chapter!

07/23/2007 03:35 am
Oops, I guess I forgot about the sperm bit. Sorry! What can I say except that my memory's not what it used to be, lol
Hee, that's okay... happens to the best of us! :)

dicecanntcry
07/23/2007 01:51 am
Spike was absolutely certain he’d made the wrong decision.

I don't think I've ever in my life read a post-NFA fic where the author has Spike admit he did the wrong thing by staying away and not going to Buffy. I was honestly beginning to think I never would, in fact. Bravo to you for having the balls to say Spike did something wrong. Yes, he had his reasons, he was insecure, he was afraid of what she might say. But bottom line, he made the wrong decision. thank you for letting me read that in a story. :)
Glad I could hit on your one issue. :) I think whether Spike was wrong depends on whether or not Buffy really loved him... but in this case, he definitely made the wrong choice. Thanks for the review!

07/22/2007 10:05 pm
Beautiful reunion -- and then seriously bad vibes for Buffy. What a twist!
Thanks! Glad you liked it.

pfeifferpack
07/22/2007 08:21 pm
AHA...my guess is that Buffy is sick and dying. I also guess that Spike will figure that out (if he hasn't already). He COULD always turn her LOL.

Great update.
Kathleen
He *could* turn her... but I don't think either of them would want that. After having died twice, I don't think Buffy would want to artificially prolong her life... and I don't think it would be the same for Spike if she were a vampire.

07/22/2007 08:18 pm
Darn, what now? Is the child, Angel's? Anyway, very fulfilling chapter.:)
No, the child was from a sperm donor. Buffy said that in the last chapter. Besides, Angel was dusted in the NFA battle, five years before Joy was born - and he never shanshued, so he couldn't have gotten Buffy pregnant.

07/22/2007 07:33 pm
Evil writer has something up her sleeve. Well, at least Spike had one good night.
Heh, I'm evil, all right. :)

07/22/2007 04:23 pm
Okay, reunion sex and "I love you" - good.

Evil cliffhanger - bad!

What's wrong with Buffy? And does Spike already know about it?
Heh, I wrote this with the intention (I'm such a bad person) of lulling you into the happy reunion sex... but the fact is, they jumped right to the sex and skipped the important talking - just like they always do, and it's never led to good. Hence the increasing sense of foreboding. :)

Tamara
07/22/2007 03:43 pm
I don't think he knows.
Well, Buffy doesn't think so, either, or she wouldn't be having such a hard time telling him. But he obviously had a reason for coming there, which we don't know yet.

07/22/2007 03:27 pm
Whatever's wrong with Buffy, Spike'll fix it. I have complete faith in that :P
Unless it's something Spike has no control over...

JO
07/22/2007 03:09 pm
Wow whatever it is their both hiding it sounds pretty bad, I trust u to make a happy ending for all involved, I'm just glad it's not icky O/C's.
I wouldn't put too much trust in a happy ending, if I were you. Right from the beginning, this was meant to be an angsty, heartbreaking fic.

07/22/2007 10:21 am
Oh no what is wrong with Buffy and can it be solved.
More please.
Thanks for the review!

07/22/2007 07:00 am
Pshhh, so much for happy romps in the sack. Looks like Buffy's got death nipping at her heals, or maybe a dogging degenerative illness. Do you think perhaps Spike showed up because Willow called him to say that Buffy was dying and he should go to her? Man, that's a tough sitch any way you slice it. She's going to have to tell him that baby was meant to be his.

He didn’t understand the woman she had become, couldn’t read her the way he used to. Oh, oh! Is that my influence? I recognized the phrasing =D
I'm sorry, did I just hear you use the word "happy" in conjunction with this fic? You must have me confused with some other author. :) And yes, I took that line from our email conversation... might be some other things you recognize in the next chapter too. :) Thanks for the input!

kim
07/22/2007 06:01 am
She's dying, and let me guess...he knows. You'd think that Slayer healing would prevent a serious illness at her young age.....will he make her last days wonderful, or will she want him to turn her so they can stay together?

Her poor little girl...
Well, slayer healing didn't seem to help her when she had the flu, so probably a rapidly progressing disease might move too fast for her slayer healing to take care of it.