In Heat by NautiBitz
Chapter: Heat Wave

Ooh yay bonus and epilogue!!! :-)
06/09/2010 04:01 pm
 

olinka
07/15/2008 02:28 am
Funny as hell :) Thanks a lot !!!

10/20/2007 05:20 am
fun read, thank you. spike's tap dance with dawn is hilarious. spike/buffy is just very well done spike/buffy.

10/18/2007 08:15 pm
Spike just does not lie well but is so cute when he tries. Cute butt, cute lies....Dawn had a lucky day.

Love the Bronze scene, they may not be thrilled but at least they accept. Would that it had been so.

Kathleen
Love the rubber ducky bit too! Somewho I can just see him playful like this.

Roxy
10/18/2007 05:39 pm
Well I really liked the story and all...but what happened to that slutty girl Spike had sex with? Unless it was my imagination, I really thought I read something about her bouncing on his er, lap, en him sucking on...places...and stuff...shouldn't there at least ...you know, be some kind of confrontation about that?
Oh, he didn't have sex with her! He had his pants on (I think I used the term 'clothed'), and she was essentially giving him a lapdance while he squeezed her boobs. Just a normal visit to the 'champagne room' in a strip club, really. He didn't go down there with the intent to have sex with her; he told them he was going downstairs so he could avoid being thrown out (ie, 'going downstairs' means 'I'm gonna spend lots of money'). So he just sort of used it as time to talk out his pain and get a good grope in the bonus. And all the stripper wanted was his money -- I'm sure she was relieved that she didn't have to sex him for it.

It's funny, no one has ever mentioned that. I guess I should have made it more clear.