ARe you sure Buffy couldn't twist the Immortal's head off too? Nice story.

very good beginning. thanks for the read. do not believe you need the a/n

Interesting start. Can't wait to see where you take this.

Yeah! Great first chapter. Can't wait for more. You've got me hooked now.

Promising beginning... I look forward to the confrontation.

AHA the truth is out. I'm on board....tell on oh storyteller.

Kathleen