nice start - I love that Buffy's daughter can kick a vampire hard enough to hurt.  :)

Someone who didn’t know them who saw them right now might think they were father and daughter. And that thought was enough to disturb Spike immensely.

That's too funny...  Yes, Spike as daddy...  thoroughly disburbing.

Blue

 

I'm hooked and ready for the next chapter! 

just a note for you. you wrote:

She had taken Camilla out for ice cream. When she had been ordering the little girl had wondered off and no one in the shop knew where she’d gone.

The second sentence is a little grammatically awkward.

now on to chapter 2!

 I'm enjoying this immensely.

Oh, that was wonderful!!! Is Spike the father?? Please, PLEASE let him be the father!!! Going on to read the next chapter now; awesome story so far!!!

ok where is the rest. Please give me more.

camilla has spike hooked already. very good read, thank you.

Intriguing enough that I definitely want to read more. Buffy's little chip off the ol' block is too cute for words. Another Summers girl who's obviously gonna have Spike wrapped around her little finger. Really looking forward to the scene where Spike and Buffy meet again after all these years.

Oooh, I'm liking it so far! Like Mom, like daughter re "bampire". Does Spike have a clue?

Wait until he finds out he's the daddy that's gonna throw his head into a spin , can't wait for the reunion, more pleae.

Oooh, I like this a lot!

Hi Moluv - nice story. You don't need all the backstory in the beginning - who gives a damn where Angel is? Also, I don't believe for a minute that Buffy wouldn't be running around like a crazy person looking for her kid - not for two hours. The little girl is cute and her conversations with Spike are very nice.

great start. can't wait to read more.