Laundromatic by Verity Watson
Chapter: Ch. 1: Tide

12/23/2007 11:01 am
“Sure. I’ve heard of disco.” Great line, and fun plot. I like the way your Spike and Buffy are interacting in a different environment.

11/29/2007 08:31 pm
love the conversation. very good opening chapter, thank you.

time of change
11/27/2007 08:44 pm
"Sure. I've heard of disco."

Hee! You are off to a great start. I look forward to reading more.

11/26/2007 11:48 pm
Oh lovely! I hope your muse insists on more. This "other side of William the Bloody with hints of William the Human" would make a lovely relationship. Love Riley slopping hog and making jello LOL.

THIS is a film-worthy Spike comment the voice is so perfect:"Let me guess. Righteous Finn came back from his visit to Iowa and all is not well with our young lovers.” Excellent!


11/26/2007 10:38 pm
Buffy's last line just makes me cringe. I wonder if she knows that Paul McCartney was in a band before Wings?
ROFL! Nightshift, I'm not sure if she's heard of Paul at all.

Tragic, isn't it?

11/26/2007 10:24 pm
Insightful Spike, reluctant-but-not-hostile Buffy... ah, S5. Quirky fun, this.

11/26/2007 01:35 am
LOL, she's such a cretin sometimes. Has she picked up nothing from having an art dealer as a mother? ;) My history teacher of a mom sure indoctrinated *me* with stuff.

Love how you write Spike. :D

11/26/2007 12:06 am
I like the forced domesticity of this, and the view into Spike's level of culture that I don't usually see.

11/25/2007 11:38 pm
I love it how Spike bedazzles Buffy with his smarts.

11/25/2007 10:04 pm
Love your sense of humor. Great beginning.

11/25/2007 09:52 pm
Wonderful story; love it when Spike is portrayed as actually having a brain; the tension b/n your B & S is excellent; I keep waiting for the shoe to drop; for Spike to say something he shouldn't and Buffy to bop him in the nose! Can't wait for update; please make it soon!

Pam S
11/25/2007 09:37 pm
Buffy, what a limited child..
And Spike, for such a "beast" that she considers beneath her-cultured and educated.

She really doesn't have a clue. Poor Buffy, what a limited existance. Kill Demons or Die !

And not to throw stones and complain about this nice story you are continuing. But I have been checking religiously for Mr. Pratt to see what those Possibililties are. How's the muse?

Thanks, Pam! And yes, Buffy might save the world, but I don't know what gets her out of bed in the morning. :)

11/25/2007 09:28 pm
ROFL - Love this valley-girl Buffy and sophisticated Spike. Some more revelations are undoubtedly right around the corner. :)

11/25/2007 08:25 pm
great start look forward to more soon.