Pleasure reading the series once again - Congratulations of terrific series.
I will make it one of my Christmas recommends over at Buffytube -
Thanks for your work, whatever you might think after that rant few chapters back I really did enjoy reading this. Maybe not so much because of the romance part, because, like I said earlier, it stretched the limits of how much hot-cold, "I'd like to, but I'm scared", immature drama-queen crap I can stand. Um. Sorry, got carried away. Again.
But (and it's a nice but)! All stories in this arc are really well developed, I think you write amazingly good dialogue and your characterization of the Scoobies is great. Not the way I see them and not necessarily the way I'd write them if I wanted to change them, but it makes sense and it just works. I liked your OCs too, especially Susan and Emma. Since your Spike kinda lost his "truth-teller" place in the group in some places, what with him being too close to the problem to really see it, they both provided much needed kicks in the butt when the rest of the gang were being too pig-headed. ;) And the plots are really nice. There's a lot of stories that have nothing to offer except a massive overload of drama and romance, and all else is just window dressing. Here I had the feeling that it actually mattered and was more than just a way to bring us a step closer to Spuffy. ;)
So, thanks again, and I'll be reading more of your stories later (and probably leaving a lot of longish and ranting reviews too), now I have to go and vote, it's presidential election day over here. ;)
As I said in the "Looking for a Fanfic"-Section, I did enjoy this story very much. The whole storyarch from The hardest thing in the World to Slay Bells is well composed, you gather up all lose ends, and, may I ad, you do it in a elegant and eloquent way.
But I have to ask:
You didn`t just borrow Susan, you were a little inspired by Harrys adventures, weren`t you? I mean this question in a totally positive way, because I think it was really good, but I think I noticed a familiar, for a better word of it, tone or atmosphere. Perhaps it is because I listened to Storm Front and Fool Moon just two days ago, but sometimes i just waited for Harry to round the corner.
Perhaps that will happen someday? You already have the Susan link...
I actually wrote most of the series before reading the Dresden Files, so probably the tone is just similar by coincidence (or because that's the type of stuff I like to read in general), but some of the magical elements are based on the Dresden 'verse, like thaumaturgy and some of the combat magic. The Buffyverse doesn't explain how magic works nearly as well as the Dresden Files, but I think they have a similar enough basis that one works in the other's world.
I would love to write a Buffy/Dresden crossover - probably not in this series, but as a standalone story - but I haven't figured out how to reconcile the different types of vampires yet. :)
"Someone who knew what she wanted, and recognized that she was holding it in her hands."
This is how Buffy should have been. I'm glad you fixed that. You know, those shows creators have some good ideas, but then they're screwing them up :)
I hope you'll start a new fic soon!
"Her touch was tender, unhurried, not the frantic fumblings in his crypt or the zero-to-sixty lust of the graveyard, but the languid kiss of someone who knew she had all the time in the world. Someone who knew what she wanted, and recognized that she was holding it in her hands." Nothing better sums up what we all hoped Buffy would one day realize and acknowledge. This paragraph alone was worth every moment of angst and every time Buffy drove me crazy.
I felt sorry for Jacob but that resolution was the only possible one for him.
Liked the use of the Council in clean-up and Buffy protecting Spike's "guilt" from those likely to vote for staking.
I have the feeling that at the end of this S6 ride Spike would be looking into a soul just as he did the one in canon...same reason actually just different impetus. He knows that without that soul the time may come when he won't know the right choice and he now wants that power of knowing. I can see this Spike heading for Africa (only letting Buffy know to one degree or another of his plan...certainly his intention to return)in quest of his soul.
Really wonderfully written series here and your Buffy actually grew up. Her love is built on certainty not like on screen. She has fought it but KNOWS what and who she wants...no cookie cooking needed. The oven has dinged at last.
Kathleen
Interesting thoughts about the soul. I haven't really thought that far ahead (and honestly, not sure whether I'll get that far in the series). When I first starting writing this series (lo, those many months ago), I intended it to be a story where Buffy manages to make things work with soulless Spike. But you're right - he's definitely going to be challenged, and uncertain that he's making the right choice. Especially considering what I have planned for him (evil laugh - mwahahaa), I can certainly see him feeling like he needs the soul.
Thanks for the review!
Awww, Buffy finally got to the believing part. And the Scoobs are at least ambivalent, if not welcoming...
Good that Willow still gets that overdue training, too!
Wonderful ending. Lovely last line. I'm just sad that it's over.
